Hi Rebecca

I have reviewed the text and this, which is probably my last RFC, is ready for 
publication.

I agree with Loa’s proposed acknowledgement of Adrian’s contribution which I am 
sure you can suitably phrase.

Best regards

Stewart

> On 19 Jun 2025, at 21:50, Rebecca VanRheenen 
> <rvanrhee...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Adrian, authors, and Jim*,
> 
> Adrian - Thank you for providing the updated text. We have updated the files 
> accordingly (see list of files below)
> 
> Authors - Please let us know if you approve of the document in its current 
> form or if any further updates are needed.
> 
> *Jim - As AD, please review the changes to the definitions for "MPLS Payload” 
> and "Post-Stack Header (PSH)”  in Section 1.2 and let us know if you approve. 
> These changes are best viewed in this diff file: 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-lastdiff.html.
> 
> — FILES (please refresh) —
> 
> Updated XML file:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.xml
> 
> Updated output files:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.txt
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.pdf
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.html
> 
> Diff file showing changes made during AUTH48:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-auth48diff.html
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff diff 
> between last version and this)
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between 
> last version and this)
> 
> Diff files showing all changes:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-diff.html
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790-alt-diff.html (diff showing 
> changes where text is moved or deleted)
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9790
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/rv
> 
> 
>> On Jun 18, 2025, at 1:20 PM, Adrian Farrel <adr...@olddog.co.uk> wrote:
>> 
>> RFC Editor (Rebecca), authors, Working Group,
>> 
>> Document Shepherd here.
>> 
>> This document seemed to stagnate over the discussion of a couple of minor 
>> editorial points. So I have been chatting with Greg and Loa, and we have 
>> agreed some changes that seem to address the concerns.
>> 
>> I have based these changes on the text at 
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9790.txt
>> 
>> Section 1.2
>> OLD
>>  MPLS Payload:  All data after the label stack and the optional Post-
>>     Stack header.
>> NEW
>>  MPLS Payload:  All data after the label stack and any optional PSHs. It
>>     is possible that more than one type of PSH may be present in a
>>     packet, and some PSH specifications might allow multiple PSHs of
>>     the same type. The presence rules for multiple PSHs are a matter 
>>     for the documents that define those PSHs, e.g., in
>>     [I-D.ietf-mpls-mna-ps-hdr].
>> END
>> 
>> Section 1.2
>> OLD
>>  Post-Stack Header (PSH):  A field containing information that may be
>>     of interest to the egress Label Switching Router (LSR) or transit
>>     LSRs.  Examples include a control word [RFC4385] [RFC8964] or an
>>     associated channel header [RFC4385] [RFC5586] [RFC9546].  A parser
>>     needs to be able to determine where the PSH ends in order to find
>>     the embedded packet.
>> NEW
>>  Post-Stack Header (PSH):  A field containing information that may be
>>     of interest to the egress Label Switching Router (LSR) or transit
>>     LSRs.  Examples include a control word [RFC4385] [RFC8964] or an
>>     associated channel header [RFC4385] [RFC5586] [RFC9546].
>> END
>> 
>> 
>> I hope with these two changes, all of the authors can confirm their AUTH48 
>> proposal.
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Adrian
>> 
> 

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