Hi, Jim. Many thanks for the prompt reply! So noted: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9893
Thanks again! Lynne Bartholomew RFC Production Center > On Jan 26, 2026, at 9:55 AM, James Guichard <[email protected]> > wrote: > > approved. > > From: Lynne Bartholomew <[email protected]> > Date: Monday, January 26, 2026 at 12:30 PM > To: Eric Kinzie <[email protected]>, James Guichard > <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, Lou Berger <[email protected]>, > [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] > <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, > [email protected] <[email protected]>, > [email protected] <[email protected]> > Subject: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9893 > <draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-19> for your review > > Dear Eric and *AD (Jim), > > Eric, we have made this update. > > * Jim, please review the latest update in Section 1, where a "MAY" has been > added, and let us know if you approve. > > The latest files are posted here. 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https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9893-alt-diff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454382820546%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=HcUah8uLCMb6yDEzsbPCmm3vY7EGVg5%2BMSFXcJTw5zc%3D&reserved=0 > > Thank you! > > Lynne Bartholomew > RFC Production Center > > > On Jan 23, 2026, at 12:52 PM, Eric Kinzie <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Lynne, > > > >>> Should "Traffic Classification Data Items provided by the modem are" be > >>> "The Traffic Classification Data Item provided by the modem is" or > >>> possibly "Traffic Classification Sub-Data Items provided by the modem > >>> are"? Or does the text refer to multiple instances of the Traffic > >>> Classification Data Item defined in RFC 9892 (in which case perhaps this > >>> should be clarified)? > > > > There can be multiple instances of the Traffic Classification Data Item. > > Possibly: > > > > "The Traffic Classification Data Item provided by the modem is defined > > in [RFC9892]. In this case, a flow is identified based on information > > found in a data plane header, and one or more matches are associated > > with a single flow. As stated in [RFC8982], more than one Data Item > > MAY be included in a message to provide information on multiple traffic > > classifiers. Refer to" . . . > > > > I think the wording of the second location you pointed out is ok. > > > > Thanks, > > Eric > > > > On Mon Jan 05 10:11:22 -0800 2026, Lynne Bartholomew wrote: > >> Dear authors, > >> > >> Happy New Year! > >> > >> We could not find a reply to the following questions. Apologies if we > >> missed it. Please advise. > >> > >> Thank you! > >> > >> Lynne Bartholomew > >> RFC Production Center > >> > >>> On Dec 23, 2025, at 3:03 PM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>> <[email protected]> wrote: > >>> > >>> Hello again. Forgot to mention that we also see the following text > >>> elsewhere in this document: > >>> > >>> based on the Traffic Classification Data Item defined in > >>> [RFC9892] > >>> ... > >>> flow > >>> identification information provided by modems in the Traffic > >>> Classification Data Item defined in [RFC9892] > >>> ... > >>> flow identifier as defined by the Traffic Classification > >>> Data Item [RFC9892] > >>> > >>> Thank you. > >>> > >>> Lynne Bartholomew > >>> RFC Production Center > >>> > >>> On Dec 23, 2025, at 2:56 PM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>> <[email protected]> wrote: > >>> > >>> Dear authors, > >>> > >>> Apologies for not spotting this earlier: We see the following text in > >>> this document: > >>> > >>> Traffic Classification Data Items provided by the modem are defined in > >>> [RFC9892]. > >>> > >>> However, it appears that RFC 9892 only defines one Traffic Classification > >>> Data Item. Please note that it also defines two Sub-Data Items. > >>> > >>> Should "Traffic Classification Data Items provided by the modem are" be > >>> "The Traffic Classification Data Item provided by the modem is" or > >>> possibly "Traffic Classification Sub-Data Items provided by the modem > >>> are"? Or does the text refer to multiple instances of the Traffic > >>> Classification Data Item defined in RFC 9892 (in which case perhaps this > >>> should be clarified)? > >>> > >>> Thank you. > >>> > >>> Lynne Bartholomew > >>> RFC Production Center > >>> > >>> > >>>> On Dec 22, 2025, at 8:53 AM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>>> <[email protected]> wrote: > >>>> > >>>> Hi, Eric and Bow-Nan. > >>>> > >>>> We have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page: > >>>> > >>>> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9893&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454382837512%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Vf7HPXVQ%2FN4NOg5jhJaQfOz1O%2FrGt00%2BDMYtLo1Bd3s%3D&reserved=0 > >>>> > >>>> As this document normatively depends on RFC-to-be 9892, it will be > >>>> published when RFC-to-be 9892 is published. > >>>> > >>>> Thank you! > >>>> > >>>> Lynne Bartholomew > >>>> RFC Production Center > >>>> > >>>>> From: "Cheng, Bow-Nan - 0662 - MITLL" <[email protected]> > >>>>> Subject: Re: [EXT] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9893 > >>>>> <draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-19> for your review > >>>>> Date: December 18, 2025 at 6:13:07 PM PST > >>>>> To: Lynne Bartholomew <[email protected]>, Eric Kinzie > >>>>> <[email protected]> > >>>>> Cc: Lou Berger <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" > >>>>> <[email protected]>, "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > >>>>> "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > >>>>> "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > >>>>> "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > >>>>> "[email protected]" <[email protected]> > >>>>> > >>>>> I'm fine with this document moving forward -- thanks > >>>> > >>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 4:15 PM, Eric Kinzie <[email protected]> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> Lynne, > >>>>> > >>>>> I approve this document in its current form. No further updates needed > >>>>> for me. > >>>>> > >>>>> Thanks, > >>>>> Eric > >>>>> > >>>>> On Mon Dec 15 10:42:42 -0800 2025, Lynne Bartholomew wrote: > >>>>>> Dear Bow-Nan and Eric, > >>>>>> > >>>>>> A reminder that we do not believe that we have heard from you > >>>>>> regarding the status of this document. Please let us know whether > >>>>>> further updates are needed or you approve this document for > >>>>>> publication in its current form. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> The latest files are posted here. 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>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> Thank you! > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center > >>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> On Dec 3, 2025, at 9:03 AM, Lynne Bartholomew > >>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote: > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> Hi, Eric. Thanks for your prompt reply to our follow-up items! > >>>>>>>>>> We have changed '"Credit Window Initialization"' to "credit window > >>>>>>>>>> initialization" (quotation marks removed; they're here only to > >>>>>>>>>> show what was updated). > >>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>> This update is reflected in the latest files, which are posted > >>>>>>>>>> here. 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Thank you for the email. > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> We have updated this document per your notes below. > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> A couple follow-up items for you: > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> * Please review our update regarding our question 8); it appears > >>>>>>>>>>>> that you approved our "Perhaps" text. We kept both citations > >>>>>>>>>>>> for RFC 8175 to avoid possible confusion between "Status Data > >>>>>>>>>>>> Item" and "Credit Window Status Data Item". Please let us know > >>>>>>>>>>>> whether or not our update is correct here (and if you object to > >>>>>>>>>>>> the second citation for RFC 8175). > >>>>>>>>>>> I approved the "Perhaps" text. Your update is correct. > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> * May we change '"Credit Window Initialization"' to '"credit > >>>>>>>>>>>> window initialization"' in this sentence (appears to be used > >>>>>>>>>>>> generally and applies to this document only)? > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> Modems provide an initial credit window size at the time of > >>>>>>>>>>>> "Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>> Window Initialization". > >>>>>>>>>>> Yes, changing that to lowercase letters makes sense. I also > >>>>>>>>>>> think the > >>>>>>>>>>> quotation marks can be removed, but I'll leave that to your > >>>>>>>>>>> judgement. > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>> Thanks, > >>>>>>>>>>> Eric > >>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> = = = = = > >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. 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reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (as necessar= > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> y) the following questions, which are also in the source file. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> appear in = > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> title) for use on > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384116575%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Vm4Y41Jrdq6isLTGTzEWoh1GL7wAcQ%2BcOXfgZ9AzJrA%3D&reserved=0>. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Abstract: As it appears that the two new > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> message types > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (Credit Control and Credit Control Response) also figure > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> prominently > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in this document (and appear to be mentioned in the document > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> title), > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> would you like to also mention them in the Abstract? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document defines new Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (DLEP) Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Items that are used to support credit-based flow control. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window control is used to regulate when data may be sent to an > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> associated virtual or physical queue. The Data Items are > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> extensible > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and reusable. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Possibly: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document defines new Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (DLEP) Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Items that are used to support credit-based flow control. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window control is used to regulate when data may be sent to an > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> associated virtual or physical queue. These Data Items are > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> extensible and reusable. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This document also defines new messages that support credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> control. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> That change is fine. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] FYI: We have added expansions for > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> abbreviations where > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> they are first used, per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Guide") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc7322&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384128967%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=AMLMXhvU%2FGRCs6WVHQnp71fSMmkmR6rsxpneB1Gfz14%3D&reserved=0). > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following expansions to ensure correctness. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> DSCP: Differentiated Services Code Point (Figure 1) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> MAC: Media Access Control (Section 2) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> PCP: Priority Code Point (Figure 1) --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 1: We updated "control plane pause > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> based > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> mechanism" per RFC 8651. Please let us know any objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For example, a credit-window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> scheme for destination-specific flow control which provides > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> aggregate > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> flow control for both modem and routers has been proposed in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-manet-credit-window], and a control plane pause > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> based > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> mechanism is defined in [RFC8651]. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For example, a credit-window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> scheme for destination-specific flow control that provides > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> aggregate > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> flow control for both modems and routers has been proposed in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [Credit-Window-Extension], and a mechanism referred to as the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Control-Plane-Based Pause Extension is defined in [RFC8651]. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 2: We had trouble determining what > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is listed in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this sentence. We updated as follows. If this is incorrect, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> please > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> clarify the text. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This means that the use of FIDs, TIDs and the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> association of a TID to a DLEP destination enables a modem to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> share > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or dedicate resources as needed to match the specifics of its > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> implementation and its attached transmission technology. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This means that the use > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of FIDs and TIDs, and the association of a TID to a DLEP > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> destination, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> enable a modem to share or dedicate resources as needed to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> match the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> specifics of its implementation and its attached transmission > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> technology. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.1: We had trouble following this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sentence. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Does "framing" mean "frame size" or something else? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In the example of Ethernet, framing, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> header and trailer are all included in this count. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> "framing" is used here as it is used in the Ethernet standard. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> I would > >>>>>>>>>>>>> prefer to leave this unchanged. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.2.1: We had trouble parsing these > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sentences. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If the suggested text is not correct, please clarify "having > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> traffic available to send, but no credits available". > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Modems will need to balance the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> load generated by sending and processing credit window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> increases > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> against a router having data traffic available to send, but no > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> credits available. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ... > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Routers will need to balance the load > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> generated by sending and processing credit window requests > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> against > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> having data traffic available to send, but no credits > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> available. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Suggested: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Modems will need to balance the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> load generated by sending and processing credit window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> increases > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> against a router that has data traffic available to send but > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> no > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> available credits. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ... > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Routers will need to balance the load > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> generated by sending and processing credit window requests > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> against > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> having data traffic available to send but no available > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> credits. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3: Does "a Status Data Item" refer > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> specifically to the Status Data Item defined in RFC 8175 - in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> which > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> case RFC 8175 should be cited here - or does it refer to the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Window Status Data Item as defined in this document? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In particular, the node parsing > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the Data Item MUST terminate the session with a Status Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Item > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> indicating Invalid Data. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In particular, the node parsing > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the Data Item MUST terminate the session with a Status Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Item > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8175] indicating "Invalid Data". > >>>>>>>>>>>>> It refers to the Status Data Item defined in RFC 8175. This > >>>>>>>>>>>>> wording > >>>>>>>>>>>>> is fine. I think it is also ok to remove "; see [RFC8175]" > >>>>>>>>>>>>> from the > >>>>>>>>>>>>> previous sentence if this seems repetitive. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Or possibly: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In particular, the node parsing > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the Data Item MUST terminate the session with a Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Status > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item indicating "Invalid Data" as defined in [RFC8175]. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.1: As the dashes initially > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> appeared to be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> minus signs, we changed them to colons. If this is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> incorrect, please > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> consider whether these entries could be written in some other > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> way. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We also gave the table a title. Please let us know any > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If you prefer a different title, please specify. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original (dashes are broken in order to avoid xml2rfc's > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Double > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> hyphen within comment" error): > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Value Scale > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - - - - - > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 0 B - Bytes (Octets) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1 KB - Kilobytes (B/1024) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2 MB - Megabytes (KB/1024) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 3 GB - Gigabytes (MB/1024) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D+=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> | Value | Scale | > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D+=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> | 0 | B: Bytes (Octets) | > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +- - - -+- - - - - - - - - - - - -+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> | 1 | KB: Kilobytes (B/1024) | > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +- - - -+- - - - - - - - - - - - -+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> | 2 | MB: Megabytes (KB/1024) | > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +- - - -+- - - - - - - - - - - - -+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> | 3 | GB: Gigabytes (MB/1024) | > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +- - - -+- - - - - - - - - - - - -+ > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Table 1: Valid Scale Field Values --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> That table looks good. No objection. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.1: Does "Credit Value" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> specifically refer > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to the Credit Value field, or does it mean "credit value" as > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> used > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> generally elsewhere in this document (e.g., "appropriate > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> values" as written in Section 2)? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If the resulting > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Value results in the credit window exceeding the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> represented > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window Max Size, the Credit Window Max Size field > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> value is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> used as the new credit window size. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> It means "credit value" as used generally elsewhere and should > >>>>>>>>>>>>> not be > >>>>>>>>>>>>> capitalized. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> New: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> If the resulting > >>>>>>>>>>>>> credit value results in the credit window exceeding the > >>>>>>>>>>>>> represented > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window Max Size, the Credit Window Max Size field value > >>>>>>>>>>>>> is > >>>>>>>>>>>>> used as the new credit window size. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.2: Because this sentence as > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> written > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> indicated that the data plane state is updated as needed, we > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changed > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "are" to "is" accordingly (also per "In both cases, a router > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> MUST > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> also ensure that any data plane state, e.g., > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control], that is associated > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the TID is updated as needed." in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification, where it cites > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document). If this is incorrect, please clarify what is being > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated as needed. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If the traffic classification information is located, the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> router MUST ensure that any data plane state that is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> associated with > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the TID and its corresponding FIDs are updated as needed (per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 2.1). > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If the traffic classification information is located, the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> router MUST ensure that any data plane state that is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> associated with > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the TID and its corresponding FIDs is updated as needed (per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 2.1). --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.3: Does "a Credit Window Status > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or items" mean "one or more Credit Window Status Data Items" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> here, or > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> does "or items" refer to some other types of items other than > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Items? We ask because we see "Credit Window Status Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Item(s)" in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the next sentence. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original (the next sentence is included for context): > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> When a Credit Window Grant Data Item is received in other > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> message types, the receiving router MUST send a Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Status > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item or items reflecting the resulting Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> value of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the updated credit window. When the Credit Grant Data Item is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> received in a Destination Up Message, the Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Status Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Item(s) MUST be sent in the corresponding Destination Up > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Response > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Message. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> When a Credit Window Grant Data Item is received in other > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> message types, the receiving router MUST send one or more > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Window Status Data Items reflecting the resultant Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> value of the updated credit window. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> This means "one or more Credit Window Status Data Items". > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> New: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> For each Credit Window Grant Data Item received in other > >>>>>>>>>>>>> message types, the receiving router MUST send a Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Status > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item reflecting the resulting Credit Window value of > >>>>>>>>>>>>> the updated credit windows. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.5: Should "credit request" be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window request" as used generally elsewhere in the text? We > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> don't > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> see "credit request" used anywhere else in this document or > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> documents (Cluster 541 / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fcluster_info.php%3Fcid%3D3DC541&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384142032%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=RZ6%2FnuaRjhKeIdqq1WqNrb5X6gdzq5lwTv3ogfACQP8%3D&reserved=0). > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A special FID value, as defined below, is used to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> indicate that a credit request is being made across all > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> queues. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Yes, it should be "credit window request". > >>>>>>>>>>>>> New: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> A special FID value, as defined below, is used to > >>>>>>>>>>>>> indicate that a credit window request is being made across all > >>>>>>>>>>>>> queues. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.5: We do not see a Type field > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in RFC 8175, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> but we see a "Data Item Type" field. May we update as > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> suggested > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (per Section 11.3 ("DLEP Generic Data Item") of RFC 8175), to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> distinguish this definition from the definitions of Length in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sections 11.1 ("DLEP Signal Header") and 11.2 ("DLEP Message > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Header") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of RFC 8175, which do not mention excluding a "Type" field? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> As specified in [RFC8175], Length is the number of octets in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item, excluding the Type and Length fields. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Suggested: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> As specified in [RFC8175], Length is the number of octets in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Item, excluding the Data Item Type and Length fields. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.3.5: We changed "Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Increment" to "credi= > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> t > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window increment" here, as we could not find the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> initial-capitalized > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> form elsewhere in this document, in the group (cluster) of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> related > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> documents, or in any published RFC to date. This update is > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> also in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> line with this sentence from Section 2.2.1: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A modem receiving this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> message MUST respond with a Credit Control Response Message > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> based on > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the received message and Data Item and the processing defined > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 2.2.2, which will typically result in credit window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> increments being provided. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know any objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A modem receiving this Data Item MUST provide a Credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Increment for > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the indicated credit windows via Credit Window Grant Data > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Items > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> carried in a new Credit Control Message. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A modem receiving this Data Item MUST provide a credit window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> increment for the indicated credit windows via Credit Window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Grant > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Data Items carried in a new Credit Control Message. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.4: We changed "the mismatch of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> capabilities" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to "any mismatch in capabilities" per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. Please let us > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> know any > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> either case, the mismatch of capabilities SHOULD be reported > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> user via normal network management mechanisms, such as the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> user > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> interface or error logging. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> either case, any mismatch in capabilities SHOULD be reported > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> user via normal network management mechanisms, such as the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> user > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> interface or error logging. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] Section 4: We had trouble following "some > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> references to external documents listed below" in this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> paragraph. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> It appears that "external documents" is intended to refer to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [BCP195], [IEEE-802.1AE], and [IEEE-8802-1X]. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> However, we see that [RFC8175] cites [IEEE-802.1X] ("IEEE > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Standards > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for Local and metropolitan area networks-Port-Based Network > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Access > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Control"), but this document cites [IEEE-8802-1X] > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ("IEEE/ISO/IEC > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> International Standard-Telecommunications and exchange between > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> information technology systems-Requirements for local and > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> metropolitan area networks-Part 1X:Port-based network access > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> control"). > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> May we update as suggested? If not, please clarify the text. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The transport layer security mechanisms documented in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8175], with > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> some updated references to external documents listed below, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> can be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> applied to this document. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Suggested: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The transport layer security mechanisms documented in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8175], > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> along with the latest versions of [BCP195], [IEEE-802.1AE], > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [IEEE-8802-1X] at the time of this writing, can be applied to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> The IEEE documents should not be referenced in this sentence. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> New: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> The transport layer security mechanisms documented in [RFC8175], > >>>>>>>>>>>>> along with the latest version of [BCP195] at the time of this > >>>>>>>>>>>>> writing, > >>>>>>>>>>>>> can be applied to this document. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 18) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE-802.1AE]: The title listed here does > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> not match > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the title found at the provided URL. Is the intent here to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> specifically point to Amendment 4 (in which case the citation > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> string > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> should be changed to [IEEE-802.1AEdk-2023] and the URL should > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changed to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fieeexplore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F10225636&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384154968%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Y3Q%2BpOI87QFbxJakSnCt4GhGdvFhTRRkK1%2F1WA8Zk3E%3D&reserved=0>), > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or would > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you prefer to list [IEEE-802.1AE] per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-17? > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [IEEE-802.1AE] > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks- > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Media Access Control (MAC) Security Amendment 4: MAC > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Privacy protection", > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fieeexplore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F8585421&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384168407%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=PtXsmFv9GjtLYGGUQ6xDI8lhGxyI7r4cPCgKOYbvZAE%3D&reserved=0>. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> As listed in the edited copy of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-17: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [IEEE-802.1AE] > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> networks-Media Access Control (MAC) Security", > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2018.8585421, IEEE Std 802.1AE-2018, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> December 2018, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fieeexplore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F8585421&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384181615%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=P%2FiIDPS%2B2QKZpq9qBEWFe4bK%2BfxILX5EoIXNBXov2nE%3D&reserved=0>. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> I don't think it's necessary to specify amendment 4. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> New: > >>>>>>>>>>>>> [IEEE-802.1AE] > >>>>>>>>>>>>> IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area > >>>>>>>>>>>>> networks-Media Access Control (MAC) Security", > >>>>>>>>>>>>> DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2018.8585421, IEEE Std 802.1AE-2018, > >>>>>>>>>>>>> December 2018, > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fieeexplore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F8585421&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384194699%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=fMk%2BwABZZcGwTDE6AFu6Boivd5NcIOw1O7VJZLshBLI%3D&reserved=0>. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Appendix B: We changed "traffic > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> classification data sub > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> items" to "Traffic Classification Sub-Data Items" per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification and the rest of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group (Cluster 541 / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fcluster_info.php%3Fcid%3D3DC541&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384212226%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ofKT4CMsrsKWS507cvLWOC9fMYPVEYaVkDMu4g512fs%3D&reserved=0) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of documents. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know any objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification] defines the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> traffic > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> classification data sub items such as DiffServ code points > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> that map > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to the FIDs. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC9892] defines the Traffic > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Classification Sub-Data Items, such as DSCPs, that map to the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> FIDs. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> portion of the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> online Style Guide at > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384227649%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ZDFSc5tO1IVawc4iffH2LBbFqm2GP2XN9mOt6NHuSVg%3D&reserved=0>, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> nature > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> readers. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> but this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Reviewed. I haven't found anything that does not comply with > >>>>>>>>>>>>> the NIST > >>>>>>>>>>>>> guidance. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 21) <!-- [rfced] Please let us know if any changes are needed > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> following: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a) The following terms were used inconsistently in this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We chose to use the latter forms. Please let us know any > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> objections. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Additional Credit (field name, i.e., "Additional Credit:") / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Additional Credits ("Additional Credits field") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> credit based flow control / credit-based flow control (added > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> hyphen) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit-Based Flow Control (in text) / credit-based flow > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> control > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Control message (2 instances) / Credit Control Message > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Control Response message (1 instance) / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Control Response Message > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window size (1 instance, i.e., "a Credit Window size") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> credit window size (7 instances, e.g., "an initial credit > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> window > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> size") (used generally throughout Section 2) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> data item / Data Item (per the rest of this document and per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> group (cluster) of documents) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> different Credit windows / different credit windows > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Messages / messages ("common Messages", "No messages") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (We changed "common Messages" to "common messages".) > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Window Association Data Item (2 instances in Appendix B) / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window Association Data Item (10 instances in text, > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the table entry in the IANA Considerations section, and > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fdlep-parameters%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384243427%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=KkI1hHhBjIJolJmwGg9jUOj1UqYQj7q4TcjycY3lETE%3D&reserved=0>) > >>>>>>>>>>>>> OK. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> b) The following term appears to be used inconsistently in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document. Please let us know which form is preferred. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window / credit window (used generally, e.g., > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "associated > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window", "associated credit window", > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 'logical "Credit Window(s)s"') > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (Note: We also see 'logical "Credit Windows"' in > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension. Otherwise, all of > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> documents in this group of documents use the lowercase form > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "credit window" when used generally.) > >>>>>>>>>>>>> Let's use lowercase "credit window" when used generally. > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> c) Please let us know how/if the following should be made > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> consistent: > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Grant Data Item (3 instances in text) / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window Grant Data Item (~13 instances in text) / > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Grant Data Item (2 instances in text) ("each Grant Data Item", > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "or Grant Data Item") > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Suggested, assuming that these different forms all refer to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> same type of Data Item: Credit Window Grant Data Item, per > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fdlep-parameters%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cc9b167c733c4479a4d1608de5d00966d%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C639050454384261569%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=c%2BLolKPU0Wb0UfWG8f8%2BugdC0Jpz6zYmTcU8mdNXsqQ%3D&reserved=0>. > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Alternatively, please let us know if the IANA entry needs to > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be changed (e.g., from "Credit Window Grant" to "Credit Grant" > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or simply "Grant", noting that any such change would not match > >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the format of the other entries on the page.) --> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> These can all be changed to "Credit Window Grant Data Item". > >>>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>> > >>> > >>> > >> > -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
