Dear Megan,

On 5/8/26 7:47 PM, Megan Ferguson wrote:
All,

*AD - please review and approve the updates to the “Example” Appendix 
addressing the following update from Russ:
I found an error in the example in the appendix.  There is a typo in the 
content type object identifier.  it is using 1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.47; it 
should be 1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.57.

Thank you for your replies and guidance. We have updated the document as 
requested thus far.  Please note that we made a few slight tweaks, so be sure 
to review carefully and let us know if any further changes are necessary.  
(Russ - note that the Appendix now has figure numbering - please let me know if 
you’d like us to strip them out again, add a title to them, or leave them as 
they currently appear).

We had two further questions:

1) With regard to question 3, we see some differing opinions in your responses:

3) <!--[rfced] We had a few questions about the following text:
Original:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefixes entries of a parent
prefix, which needs to be taken into account when processing these
files.
a) Please confirm the use of the plural "sub-prefixes".
Perhaps:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent
prefix,..
Randy: common term, ok
b) Might this sentence be rephrased as:
Perhaps:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent prefix; this 
needs to be taken into account when processing these files.
—>

Oliver: Option b) reads better to me.
Russ: I think a) reads well, but my co-authors ought to weigh in on this one.
Randy: i do not see value in the added text.  the whole document describes
things which should be taken into account

[rfced] Apologies if our question was unclear.  Our main issue with the text is that 
"sub-prefixes entries” seems problematic with them both being plural and wanted 
to confirm this was not a possessive relationship missing an apostrophe or 
something.  We suggested (b) simply because the relative pronoun “which” was 
carrying a heavy load for the reader (all of the text before it).  However, Randy’s 
comment seems to imply that even the original text might not need the text after the 
comma.

Please confer amongst yourselves and let us know what you decide.

We've confirmed among the four authors that we will go with option b) without any other changes to the text.


2) Looking at the following text:

Original:
    At the time of publishing this document, the registry data published
    by ARIN are not the same RPSL as that of the other registries (see
    [RFC7485] for a survey of the WHOIS Tower of Babel);…

We don’t see mention of the exact phrase "WHOIS Tower of Babel" in RFC 7485.  
The only mention of that exact phrasing we see in the RFC Series is in RFC 9632.  Please 
confirm that the citation and/or the text surrounding it appears as intended.

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Thank you.

Megan Ferguson
RFC Production Center


On May 8, 2026, at 4:25 AM, Oliver Gasser <[email protected]> 
wrote:

Hi all,

On 5/6/26 10:38 PM, [email protected] wrote:
2) <!--[rfced] Please clarify the antecedent of "this":
Original:
In all places Carrier-Grade NAT or CGN is used in this document, this
applies to proxies as well.
-->

Either of the fixes proposed by Russ and Randy read well to me.

3) <!--[rfced] We had a few questions about the following text:
Original:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefixes entries of a parent
prefix, which needs to be taken into account when processing these
files.
a) Please confirm the use of the plural "sub-prefixes".
Perhaps:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent
prefix,..
b) Might this sentence be rephrased as:
Perhaps:
Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent prefix; this 
needs to be taken into account when processing these files.
-->

Option b) reads better to me.


7) <!-- [rfced] Regarding reference entries [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM]:
The original URLs for [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM] point to a page with an
"Sorry, we can't seem to find the page you're looking for" error
message.
We found the following URL that seems to contain the information from
the original URLs:
https://docs.db.ripe.net/RPSL-Object-Types/Descriptions-of-Primary-Objects
Is this the appropriate URL for these references?
-->

Yes, that's the appropriate URL. Given that the URL contains descriptions for 
both the intetnum: and inetnum6: DB class, I suggest to update the text as 
follows:

Original:

The reader may find [INETNUM] and [INET6NUM] informative, and certainly more 
verbose, descriptions of the inetnum: database classes.

New:

The reader may find [DBOBJECTS] informative, and certainly more verbose, 
descriptions of the inetnum: and inet6num: database classes.


[DBOBJECTS] should then replace [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM] in the references.


8) <!-- [rfced] Regarding reference entry [PREFIXLEN-FINDER:] Please review. 
References to GitHub
repositories require a commit hash (see:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#ref_repo). The original
date for this reference - June 2021 - does not appear in this
repositories commit history
(https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder/commits/main/). May
we update this reference to use the most recent commit date and commit
hash?
Current:
    [PREFIXLEN-FINDER]
               "prefixlen-finder", June 2021,
               <https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder>.
Perhaps:
    [PREFIXLEN-FINDER]
               "prefixlen-finder", commit fa70e6b, 3 June 2025,
               <https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder>.
-->



10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to terminology 
used throughout the document:
a) we have used the hyphenated end-site throughout; please let us know any 
objections.
-->

Fine by me as well.


Cheers,

Oliver

Thank you.
Megan Ferguson
RFC Production Center
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Title            : Publishing End-Site Prefix Lengths
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