Russ,

Got it!  I just wrapped this into the current version, so it will appear in 
diffs with the last round of changes.

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> On May 12, 2026, at 7:18 AM, Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Megan:
> 
> In the example appendix, I missed the line with "Error: Spurious zero bits in 
> bitstring."  Please delete that line.  It is a problem with the tool, not the 
> example.
> 
> Russ
> 
>> On May 11, 2026, at 6:42 PM, Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Authors (and *Mahesh),
>> 
>> [*Mahesh - did the pointer Russ sent help you out?  Let us know if you need 
>> anything else on this.]
>> 
>> Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as requested and reposted the 
>> files.
>> 
>> A further question that came up when removing the added figure numbering: 
>> should <artwork> throughout the document actually be in <sourcecode> with 
>> type=x509?  See 
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types for more 
>> information.
>> 
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>> 
>> Megan Ferguson
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>>> On May 11, 2026, at 8:08 AM, Oliver Gasser <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Megan,
>>> 
>>> On 5/8/26 7:47 PM, Megan Ferguson wrote:
>>>> All,
>>>> *AD - please review and approve the updates to the “Example” Appendix 
>>>> addressing the following update from Russ:
>>>>> I found an error in the example in the appendix.  There is a typo in the 
>>>>> content type object identifier.  it is using 1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.47; 
>>>>> it should be 1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.57.
>>>> Thank you for your replies and guidance. We have updated the document as 
>>>> requested thus far.  Please note that we made a few slight tweaks, so be 
>>>> sure to review carefully and let us know if any further changes are 
>>>> necessary.  (Russ - note that the Appendix now has figure numbering - 
>>>> please let me know if you’d like us to strip them out again, add a title 
>>>> to them, or leave them as they currently appear).
>>>> We had two further questions:
>>>> 1) With regard to question 3, we see some differing opinions in your 
>>>> responses:
>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] We had a few questions about the following text:
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefixes entries of a parent
>>>>>>> prefix, which needs to be taken into account when processing these
>>>>>>> files.
>>>>>>> a) Please confirm the use of the plural "sub-prefixes".
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent
>>>>>>> prefix,..
>>>> Randy: common term, ok
>>>>>>> b) Might this sentence be rephrased as:
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent prefix; 
>>>>>>> this needs to be taken into account when processing these files.
>>>>>>> —>
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Oliver: Option b) reads better to me.
>>>> Russ: I think a) reads well, but my co-authors ought to weigh in on this 
>>>> one.
>>>> Randy: i do not see value in the added text.  the whole document describes
>>>> things which should be taken into account
>>>> [rfced] Apologies if our question was unclear.  Our main issue with the 
>>>> text is that "sub-prefixes entries” seems problematic with them both being 
>>>> plural and wanted to confirm this was not a possessive relationship 
>>>> missing an apostrophe or something.  We suggested (b) simply because the 
>>>> relative pronoun “which” was carrying a heavy load for the reader (all of 
>>>> the text before it).  However, Randy’s comment seems to imply that even 
>>>> the original text might not need the text after the comma.
>>>> Please confer amongst yourselves and let us know what you decide.
>>> 
>>> We've confirmed among the four authors that we will go with option b) 
>>> without any other changes to the text.
>>> 
>>>> 2) Looking at the following text:
>>>> Original:
>>>>  At the time of publishing this document, the registry data published
>>>>  by ARIN are not the same RPSL as that of the other registries (see
>>>>  [RFC7485] for a survey of the WHOIS Tower of Babel);…
>>>> We don’t see mention of the exact phrase "WHOIS Tower of Babel" in RFC 
>>>> 7485.  The only mention of that exact phrasing we see in the RFC Series is 
>>>> in RFC 9632.  Please confirm that the citation and/or the text surrounding 
>>>> it appears as intended.
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>>>> Thank you.
>>>> Megan Ferguson
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>> On May 8, 2026, at 4:25 AM, Oliver Gasser 
>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi all,
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 5/6/26 10:38 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] Please clarify the antecedent of "this":
>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> In all places Carrier-Grade NAT or CGN is used in this document, this
>>>>>> applies to proxies as well.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> Either of the fixes proposed by Russ and Randy read well to me.
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] We had a few questions about the following text:
>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefixes entries of a parent
>>>>>> prefix, which needs to be taken into account when processing these
>>>>>> files.
>>>>>> a) Please confirm the use of the plural "sub-prefixes".
>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent
>>>>>> prefix,..
>>>>>> b) Might this sentence be rephrased as:
>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> Prefix length files can contain sub-prefix entries of a parent prefix; 
>>>>>> this needs to be taken into account when processing these files.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> Option b) reads better to me.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Regarding reference entries [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM]:
>>>>>> The original URLs for [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM] point to a page with an
>>>>>> "Sorry, we can't seem to find the page you're looking for" error
>>>>>> message.
>>>>>> We found the following URL that seems to contain the information from
>>>>>> the original URLs:
>>>>>> https://docs.db.ripe.net/RPSL-Object-Types/Descriptions-of-Primary-Objects
>>>>>> Is this the appropriate URL for these references?
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> Yes, that's the appropriate URL. Given that the URL contains descriptions 
>>>>> for both the intetnum: and inetnum6: DB class, I suggest to update the 
>>>>> text as follows:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> 
>>>>> The reader may find [INETNUM] and [INET6NUM] informative, and certainly 
>>>>> more verbose, descriptions of the inetnum: database classes.
>>>>> 
>>>>> New:
>>>>> 
>>>>> The reader may find [DBOBJECTS] informative, and certainly more verbose, 
>>>>> descriptions of the inetnum: and inet6num: database classes.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> [DBOBJECTS] should then replace [INET6NUM] and [INETNUM] in the 
>>>>> references.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Regarding reference entry [PREFIXLEN-FINDER:] Please 
>>>>>> review. References to GitHub
>>>>>> repositories require a commit hash (see:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#ref_repo). The original
>>>>>> date for this reference - June 2021 - does not appear in this
>>>>>> repositories commit history
>>>>>> (https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder/commits/main/). May
>>>>>> we update this reference to use the most recent commit date and commit
>>>>>> hash?
>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>  [PREFIXLEN-FINDER]
>>>>>>             "prefixlen-finder", June 2021,
>>>>>>             <https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder>.
>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>  [PREFIXLEN-FINDER]
>>>>>>             "prefixlen-finder", commit fa70e6b, 3 June 2025,
>>>>>>             <https://github.com/massimocandela/prefixlen-finder>.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to 
>>>>>> terminology used throughout the document:
>>>>>> a) we have used the hyphenated end-site throughout; please let us know 
>>>>>> any objections.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> Fine by me as well.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Oliver
>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>> Megan Ferguson
>>>>>> RFC Production Center
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>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> RFC9977 (draft-ietf-opsawg-prefix-lengths-14)
>>>>>> Title            : Publishing End-Site Prefix Lengths
>>>>>> Author(s)        : O. Gasser, R. Bush, M. Candela, R. Housley
>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Joe Clarke, Benoît Claise
>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Mohamed Boucadair, Mahesh Jethanandani
>>>>> 
>>> 
>> 
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