Hi Paul, Authors,

(Taking over for Megan temporarily as she is offline for the rest of this week.)

Paul - Thank you for your response! We have noted your approval here: 
https://queue.rfc-editor.org/final-review/rfc9980/.

Authors - As all of our queries have been resolved, we will begin preparing 
this document for publication. 

Thank you for your time!

Best,
Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Jun 16, 2026, at 8:52 AM, Paul Wouters 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> 
> On Mon, Jun 15, 2026 at 11:07 PM Megan Ferguson 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> ADs,
> 
> Just in case this is pending me as the then-AD at the time,
> 
>   
> Just a friendly reminder that this document is ready to go once we hear back 
> from the AD on the following:
> 
> > On Jun 1, 2026, at 9:12 AM, Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> 
> > wrote:
> > 
> > Now we believe we just need AD input to wrap things up.
> > 
> > *AD - Please weigh in on question 8 and the authors’ updates to resolve 
> > question 12 (copied below for convenience):
> > 
> >>>> 8) <!--[rfced] [AD] The authors submitted a query about possible 
> >>>> downrefs suggested by IDNITs (see list below).  This is not generally 
> >>>> something the RPC advises on.  Upon conference between AD and authors, 
> >>>> please let us know if any updates/changes are necessary.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
> >>>> 
> >>>>   (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative 
> >>>> references
> >>>>   to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-203'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-204'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-205'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'IANA-OPENPGP'
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 3394
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7748
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8032
> >>>> 
> >>>>> From the authors: "We listed those references as normative as they
> >>>> contain the algorithmic specifications needed.
> >>>> 
> >>>> We would appreciate guidance from the RFC Editor Team if this should
> >>>> be handled differently."
> 
> The downrefs are fine.
>   >>>> 
> >>>> —>
> > 
> > From Falko:
> >> as I understand question 8, we still need to address the "downref" 
> >> problems:
> >> - normative references to the FIPS specs: Can these simply be kept?
> >> - normative reference to IANA registry: What is the right way here?
> >> - normative references to "Informational" RFCs: It seems to me those need 
> >> some kind of annotation if we want to keep them as normative references. 
> >> But I don't understand the procedure. Can you point out the possible 
> >> options here?
> 
> No need for any changes.
>   > 
> > 
> > And for question 12 (inclusive language):
> >> 12) We did not find any issues regarding inclusive language. The word 
> >> 'traditional' is used in line with the definition of 'traditional 
> >> cryptographic algorithms' in RFC 9794. For clarity, we suggest to add this 
> >> term in Section 1.1.1. We propose the following change. We also believe 
> >> there should be a comma before the "and", please feel free to remove it if 
> >> that is wrong.
> >> 
> >> Section 1.1.1
> >> 
> >> OLD:
> >> Specifically, the terms "multi-algorithm", "composite" and "non-composite" 
> >> are used in correspondence with the definitions therein.
> >> 
> >> NEW:
> >> Specifically, the terms "multi-algorithm", "composite", "non-composite", 
> >> and "traditional" are used in correspondence with the definitions therein.
> 
> That looks fine to me.
>   > Once we hear back some AD guidance on the above, we believe the document 
> will be ready to move forward in the publication process.
> 
> No issues with the proposed Section 1.1.1 change and no issues with the 
> downrefs. Looks good to go.
> 
> 
> Paul
> 
>   > 
> >   The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.txt
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.pdf
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.xml
> > 
> >   The diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-diff.html (comprehensive)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> > 
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48diff.html (Final Review 
> > changes only)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> > side)
> > 
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-diff.html (to see IANA 
> > table/list changes)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-rfcdiff.html (side by 
> > side)
> > 
> >   The Final Review status page for this document is viewable here:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9980
> > 
> > Thank you.
> > 
> > Megan Ferguson
> > RFC Production Center
> > 
> > 
> >> On May 30, 2026, at 2:25 PM, Aron Wussler <[email protected]> wrote:
> >> 
> >> Hi Megan,
> >> 
> >> I also reviewed and approve the document.
> >> 
> >> Cheers,
> >> Aron
> >> 
> >> --
> >> Aron Wussler
> >> Sent with ProtonMail, OpenPGP key 0x7E6761563EFE3930
> >> 
> >> 
> >> On Friday, 29 May 2026 at 23:11, Megan Ferguson 
> >> <[email protected]> wrote:
> >> 
> >>> Stavros, Johannes, and Falko,
> >>> 
> >>> Thank you for your replies.
> >>> 
> >>> We have updated as suggested by Falko (thank you for spotting that!) and 
> >>> reposted the files.
> >>> 
> >>> We have also recorded your approvals of the document in its current form. 
> >>>  We will assume your approval stands even if a coauthor submits further 
> >>> changes unless we hear objection at that time. Once we have approval from 
> >>> Aron and AD approval, this document should be ready to move forward in 
> >>> the publication process.
> >>> 
> >>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.txt
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.pdf
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.html
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.xml
> >>> 
> >>> The diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-diff.html (comprehensive)
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>> 
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48diff.html (Final Review 
> >>> changes only)
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>> side)
> >>> 
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-lastdiff.html (last version to 
> >>> this)
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>> 
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-diff.html (to see IANA 
> >>> table/list changes)
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>> 
> >>> The Final Review status page for this document is viewable here:
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9980
> >>> 
> >>> Thank you.
> >>> 
> >>> Megan Ferguson
> >>> RFC Production Center
> >>> 
> >>>> On May 29, 2026, at 1:28 AM, Stavros Kousidis <[email protected]> 
> >>>> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Hi Megan,
> >>>> 
> >>>> Looks good for me, too.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thank you all
> >>>> Stavros
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> Am 29. Mai 2026 07:50:59 MESZ schrieb Johannes Roth 
> >>>> <[email protected]>:
> >>>> Hi Megan,
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thanks for the quick action. I reviewed the document and it looks good 
> >>>> to me (aside from the comma issue that Falko mentioned).
> >>>> 
> >>>> Best,
> >>>> Johannes
> >>>> 
> >>>> On 27.05.2026 18:59, Megan Ferguson wrote:
> >>>> Hi Aron and *AD,
> >>>> 
> >>>> [*AD - please respond regarding question #8 and review/approve the 
> >>>> author’s suggested text to resolve question #12].
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thanks for the reply and guidance. We have updated as requested.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Note that we made the further change of removing “of RFC 9980” from the 
> >>>> Reference column of the IANA Considerations table (now list). This 
> >>>> matches the method of referencing most commonly seen in recently 
> >>>> published RFCs; please let us know any objections. Note that these 
> >>>> changes are best viewed in the “alt diff” files below.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes once the 
> >>>> document is published as an RFC.
> >>>> 
> >>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.txt
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.pdf
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.html
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980.xml
> >>>> 
> >>>> The diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-diff.html (comprehensive)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>>> 
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48diff.html (Final Review 
> >>>> changes only)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>>> side)
> >>>> 
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-diff.html (to see IANA 
> >>>> table/list changes)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980-alt-rfcdiff.html (side by 
> >>>> side)
> >>>> 
> >>>> The Final Review status page for this document is viewable here:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9980
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thank you.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Megan Ferguson
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>> 
> >>>> On May 27, 2026, at 5:11 AM, Aron Wussler <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Hi Megan,
> >>>> 
> >>>> thanks for the thorough editing. We provide our answers and our 
> >>>> suggested changes in the following.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 1) We suggest the following key words: pgp, pqc, encryption, digital 
> >>>> signature, post-quantum
> >>>> 
> >>>> 2) We agreed to the following change:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Section 1
> >>>> 
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>> Namely, these are ML-KEM [FIPS-203] as a Key Encapsulation Mechanism
> >>>> (KEM), a KEM being a modern building block for public key encryption,
> >>>> and ML-DSA [FIPS-204] as well as SLH-DSA [FIPS-205] as signature
> >>>> schemes.
> >>>> 
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>> ML-KEM [FIPS-203] was selected as a Key Encapsulation Mechanism (KEM).
> >>>> A KEM is a modern building block for public key encryption.
> >>>> ML-DSA [FIPS-204] and SLH-DSA [FIPS-205] were selected as signature 
> >>>> schemes.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 3) We would like to leave these sentences in their current places. They 
> >>>> clarify technical details of the algorithm choices, and thus do not 
> >>>> belong into the terminology section.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 4) We agreed to the following change:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Section 4.3.1
> >>>> 
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>> Note that like in the case of the algorithms X25519 and X448
> >>>> specified in [RFC9580], for the ML-KEM composite schemes, in the case
> >>>> of a v3 PKESK packet, the symmetric algorithm identifier is not
> >>>> encrypted.
> >>>> 
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>> Note that for the ML-KEM composite schemes, in the case of a v3 PKESK
> >>>> packet, the symmetric algorithm identifier is not encrypted.
> >>>> This follows the construction of X25519 and X448 specified in [RFC9580].
> >>>> 
> >>>> 5a) We agree to the proposed change to use a definitions list.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 5b) Indeed, the entries for ID 30 and ID 31 should be references to 
> >>>> Section 5. The reference for ID 35 and 36 should be to Section 4.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 6) We agree to the proposed change.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 7) We agree to the proposed change.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 8) We defer to the AD for this item.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 9) We do not mind wrapping here. Feel free to change the tag or manually 
> >>>> add a newline to resolve this.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 10a) The abbreviation extensions seem fine to us.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 10b) That is correct, you may update the document to use "Module 
> >>>> Learning with Errors" as expansion for "MLWE".
> >>>> 
> >>>> 10c) No objections.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 10d) We prefer to remove "(PK)" and "(SK)" from Table 8 in Section 6.1.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 11a) We prefer to use "sentence case" for the term, that is, capitalize 
> >>>> the first word only in titles and beginning of sentences. As far as we 
> >>>> can see, the only inconsistent spelling is in Section 2.1 in the 
> >>>> parenthesis "(Algorithm IDs 31 and 36)". We prefer this to be adjusted 
> >>>> to sentence case.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Section 2.1
> >>>> 
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>> (Algorithm IDs 31 and 36)
> >>>> 
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>> (algorithm IDs 31 and 36)
> >>>> 
> >>>> 11b) The list looks fine to us.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 12) We did not find any issues regarding inclusive language. The word 
> >>>> 'traditional' is used in line with the definition of 'traditional 
> >>>> cryptographic algorithms' in RFC 9794. For clarity, we suggest to add 
> >>>> this term in Section 1.1.1. We propose the following change. We also 
> >>>> believe there should be a comma before the "and", please feel free to 
> >>>> remove it if that is wrong.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Section 1.1.1
> >>>> 
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>> Specifically, the terms "multi-algorithm", "composite" and 
> >>>> "non-composite" are used in correspondence with the definitions therein.
> >>>> 
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>> Specifically, the terms "multi-algorithm", "composite", "non-composite", 
> >>>> and "traditional" are used in correspondence with the definitions 
> >>>> therein.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> Kind regards,
> >>>> Aron, on behalf of all authors
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> --
> >>>> Aron Wussler
> >>>> Sent with ProtonMail, OpenPGP key 0x7E6761563EFE3930
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> On Wednesday, 20 May 2026 at 15:43, Megan Ferguson 
> >>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Hi Aron,
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thanks for the heads up! We appreciate your collaboration so our mail 
> >>>> exchange is easier to follow.
> >>>> 
> >>>> We’ll look for your reply once you get things ironed out.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Megan Ferguson
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>> 
> >>>> On May 20, 2026, at 2:20 AM, Aron Wussler <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Hi Megan,
> >>>> 
> >>>> We're already drafting internally an answer which we all agree to - 
> >>>> sorry if this is taking longer than expected.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Cheers,
> >>>> Aron
> >>>> 
> >>>> --
> >>>> Aron Wussler
> >>>> Sent with ProtonMail, OpenPGP key 0x7E6761563EFE3930
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> On Tuesday, 19 May 2026 at 19:36, Megan Ferguson 
> >>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> Authors and *AD,
> >>>> 
> >>>> [*AD - please see question 8 in our mail below]
> >>>> 
> >>>> Just a reminder that this document awaits your attention.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Please review both emails sent thus far (AUT48 instructions as well as 
> >>>> document-specific questions) and let us know how to proceed on any 
> >>>> issues as well as any changes you might like to request upon completion 
> >>>> of your review of the document.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Thank you.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Megan Ferguson
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>> 
> >>>> On May 8, 2026, at 2:50 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >>>> 
> >>>> All,
> >>>> 
> >>>> *AD - please review question #8 below. Please note also that we assume 
> >>>> AD approval of the change between versions -16 and -17 as it was 
> >>>> submitted by Paul.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Authors - While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve 
> >>>> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source 
> >>>> file.
> >>>> 
> >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> >>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 2) <!--[rfced] This sentence is difficult to parse please rephrase (and
> >>>> perhaps consider breaking up into multiple sentences).
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Namely, these are ML-KEM [FIPS-203] as a Key Encapsulation Mechanism
> >>>> (KEM), a KEM being a modern building block for public key encryption,
> >>>> and ML-DSA [FIPS-204] as well as SLH-DSA [FIPS-205] as signature
> >>>> schemes.
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 3) <!--[rfced] Would it make sense to include the following sentences
> >>>> from the subsections of 5.1 and Section 6 in the Terminology
> >>>> section?
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Throughout this specification EdDSA refers to the PureEdDSA variant
> >>>> defined in [RFC8032].
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Throughout this specification ML-DSA refers to the default pure and
> >>>> hedged version of ML-DSA defined in [FIPS-204].
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Throughout this specification SLH-DSA refers to the default pure and
> >>>> hedged version of SLH-DSA defined in [FIPS-205].
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 4) <!--[rfced] How may we rephrase to avoid the stacked "in the case"?
> >>>> Perhaps breaking this sentence up would be helpful?
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Note that like in the case of the algorithms X25519 and X448
> >>>> specified in [RFC9580], for the ML-KEM composite schemes, in the case
> >>>> of a v3 PKESK packet, the symmetric algorithm identifier is not
> >>>> encrypted.
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to the table in the
> >>>> IANA Considerations section:
> >>>> 
> >>>> a) The table of IANA values is very difficult to read and, now that
> >>>> some edits have been made to the text, exceed our 72-character line
> >>>> length limit.
> >>>> 
> >>>> We suggest updating to a definitions list for readability. This
> >>>> update would appear as seen here:
> >>>> 
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9980alt.txt
> >>>> 
> >>>> b) We see links to specific tables in the various "Format" columns.
> >>>> Please review as ID 30 (for example) mentions Tables 6 and 7 (which
> >>>> are in Sections 5.1.1 and 5.1.2, respectively), while the Reference
> >>>> column is pointing to Section 5.2. If this is not as expected, please
> >>>> review each entry and let us know if/how to update.
> >>>> 
> >>>> c) Please note that we will communicate any updates we've made to the
> >>>> text in the IANA table to IANA for corresponding updates at
> >>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/openpgp/openpgp.xhtml#openpgp-public-key-algorithms
> >>>>  once AUTH48 completes (and the text is stable).
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] [NIST-PQC] Please review. The date provided for this
> >>>> reference does not match any of the dates provided at this
> >>>> reference's URL. At the bottom of the page the dates listed are
> >>>> "Created January 03, 2017, Updated December 11, 2025".
> >>>> 
> >>>> Also, the authors used in this reference entry are not listed on this
> >>>> page (with the exception of Dustin Moody who is listed in the
> >>>> "Contacts" section).
> >>>> 
> >>>> Is there another page this reference was meant to point to?
> >>>> 
> >>>> If this is the correct URL we recommend the following update:
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> Current:
> >>>> [NIST-PQC] Chen, L., Moody, D., and Y. Liu, "Post-Quantum Cryptography
> >>>> Standardization", December 2016,
> >>>> <https://csrc.nist.gov/projects/post-quantum-cryptography/post-quantum-cryptography-standardization>.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Perhaps:
> >>>> [NIST-PQC] NIST, "Post-Quantum Cryptography Standardization", December 
> >>>> 2025,
> >>>> <https://csrc.nist.gov/projects/post-quantum-cryptography/post-quantum-cryptography-standardization>.
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] [NISTIR-8413] FYI: We've updated the date for this
> >>>> reference from September 2022 to July 2022. Note that the version from
> >>>> September was withdrawn and replaced by an updated version in July
> >>>> 2022: https://nvlpubs.nist.gov/nistpubs/ir/2022/NIST.IR.8413.pdf. We
> >>>> also updated the series number from "NIST IR 8413" to "NIST IR
> >>>> 8413-upd1". -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 8) <!--[rfced] [AD] The authors submitted a query about possible 
> >>>> downrefs suggested by IDNITs (see list below). This is not generally 
> >>>> something the RPC advises on. Upon conference between AD and authors, 
> >>>> please let us know if any updates/changes are necessary.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
> >>>> 
> >>>> (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
> >>>> to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-203'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-204'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'FIPS-205'
> >>>> 
> >>>> - Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'IANA-OPENPGP'
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 3394
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7748
> >>>> 
> >>>> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 8032
> >>>> 
> >>>> From the authors: "We listed those references as normative as they
> >>>> contain the algorithmic specifications needed.
> >>>> 
> >>>> We would appreciate guidance from the RFC Editor Team if this should
> >>>> be handled differently."
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please have a look at the line wrap issue in Appendix 
> >>>> A.4.3. Now that the text is in <tt> to format it as fixed width, it 
> >>>> seems not to be able to wrap to fit within the 72-character limit.-->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to
> >>>> abbreviation use throughout the document:
> >>>> 
> >>>> a) We have expanded abbreviations on first use. Please review these
> >>>> expansions for accuracy.
> >>>> 
> >>>> b) The document expands MLWE as "Learning with Errors problem in
> >>>> module lattices (MLWE)". We believe the abbreviation stands for
> >>>> "Module Learning with Errors". Please let us know if/how to update.
> >>>> 
> >>>> c) We have updated the expansion of SEIPD to match RFC 9580. Please
> >>>> let us know any objections.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> Symmetrically Encrypted and Integrity Protected Data
> >>>> 
> >>>> Current:
> >>>> Symmetrically Encrypted Integrity Protected Data
> >>>> 
> >>>> d) We see PK and SK are introduced in Section 6.1, but are not used
> >>>> elsewhere in the text. Would you like to introduce them sooner and
> >>>> use them throughout? Or perhaps remove them from Section 6.1?
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments about 
> >>>> terminology use throughout the document:
> >>>> 
> >>>> a) We see both algorithm ID and Algorithm ID. Please let us know if/how 
> >>>> these should be made uniform.
> >>>> 
> >>>> b) Please review the list of terms that appear in <tt> (for special
> >>>> marking) for consistency and let us know if any updates are necessary.
> >>>> You can find the list at:
> >>>> 
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/draft-ietf-openpgp-pqc-17ttsorted.txt
> >>>> 
> >>>> -->
> >>>> 
> >>>> 
> >>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
> >>>> online
> >>>> Style Guide 
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> >>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature 
> >>>> typically
> >>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> >>>> 
> >>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this 
> >>>> should
> >>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> >>>> 
> >>>> In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for 
> >>>> clarity.
> >>>> While the NIST website
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> >>>> RFC EditorRFC9980 (draft-ietf-openpgp-pqc-17)
> >>>> 
> >>>> Title : Post-Quantum Cryptography in OpenPGP
> >>>> Author(s) : S. Kousidis, J. Roth, F. Strenzke, A. Wussler
> >>>> WG Chair(s) : Stephen Farrell, Daniel Kahn Gillmor
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