Dear RFC Editor(s),

Thank you for the careful review. Our consolidated responses follow.
Textual changes use the requested OLD/NEW format.

1) The new BCP assignment is correct.

2) Global (document title)

OLD:
Cross-Device Flows: Security Best Current Practice

NEW:
Best Current Practice for Security of Cross-Device Flows


3) Section 1.2

OLD:
This flow may be streamlined by rendering the session transfer code as a QR
code on the Authorization Device and scanned by the Consumption Device.

NEW:
This flow may be streamlined by rendering the session transfer code as a QR
code on the Authorization Device and scanning it with the Consumption
Device.


4) Section 1.2

OLD:
These flows are often used to add new devices to a network, onboard
customers to a mobile application, or provision new credentials (e.g.,
[OpenID.SIOPV2]).

NEW:
These flows are often used to add new devices to a network, onboard
customers to a mobile application, or provision new credentials (e.g., as
described in [OpenID.SIOPV2]).


5) Section 1.4

OLD:
This specification uses the terms "access token", "refresh token",
"authorization server", "resource server", "authorization endpoint",
"authorization request", and "client" defined in "The OAuth 2.0
Authorization Framework" [RFC6749].

NEW:
This specification uses the terms "access token", "refresh token",
"authorization server", "resource server", "authorization request", and
"client" defined in "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework" [RFC6749].


6) Section 2

OLD:
Section 3 provides details about susceptible protocols, and Section 4
provides attack descriptions. Section 6.1 provides details about the
security mechanisms and mitigations, Section 6.2 provides protocol
selection guidance, and Section 6.3 provides details from formal analysis
of protocols that apply to cross-device flows.

NEW:
Section 3 provides details about susceptible protocols, and Section 4
provides attack descriptions. Section 5 provides an overview of existing
protocols and standards. Section 6.1 provides details about the security
mechanisms and mitigations, Section 6.2 provides protocol selection
guidance, and Section 6.3 provides details from formal analysis of
protocols that apply to cross-device flows.


7) Section 3.3.8 (heading)

OLD:
Example A8: Access a Productivity Application

NEW:
Example A8: Access a Productivity Application (User-Transferred
Authorization Data Pattern)


Section 4.3.8

OLD:
Example B8: Account Takeover (User-Transferred Session Data Pattern)

This exploit applies to the use case described in Section 3.3.8.

An attacker wants to use some website that requires presentation of a
verifiable credential for authentication. The attacker creates a phishing
website, which will in real time capture login QR codes from the original
website and present these to the user. The attacker tries to get the user
to use the phishing website by sending messages by email or other messaging
technologies. The user scans the QR code on the phishing website, invokes
their digital wallet, and presents their credentials. Once the credentials
are presented, the original session from the attacker's device is
authorized with the user's credentials.

NEW:
Example B8: Account Takeover (User-Transferred Authorization Data Pattern)

This exploit applies to the use case described in Section 3.3.8.

An attacker obtains a user's credentials for a Computer-Aided Design (CAD)
application but cannot complete the authorization without the 6-digit
authorization code sent to the user's mobile phone. The attacker triggers
the authorization request, causing the Authorization Server to send a
6-digit authorization code to the user's mobile phone. The attacker then
contacts the user, claiming to be from the CAD application's support desk
and investigating a problem with the user's account, and asks the user to
read back the code they have just received. Because the attacker has
established the context for the code, the user provides it. The attacker
enters the code in the CAD application and obtains access to the user's
designs.


8) This change is superseded by the replacement text for Section 4.3.8 in
response 7.


9) Section 5

OLD:
An authorization server MAY use techniques such as device fingerprinting,
network address, or other techniques to detect if a cross-device protocol
is being used on the same device.

NEW:
An Authorization Server MAY use device fingerprinting, network address, or
other techniques to detect if a cross-device protocol is being used on the
same device.


10) Section 6.1.1

OLD:
The paragraph beginning "Note: There are scenarios that require that
authorization takes place..." is a normal paragraph.

NEW:
Place this paragraph in an <aside> element.


11) Section 6.1.5

OLD:
Some scenarios may require legitimate retransmission of user, QR, and
authorization data (e.g., retries).

NEW:
Some scenarios may require legitimate retransmission of user data, QR
codes, and authorization data (e.g., retries).


12) Section 6.1.8

OLD:
In some deployments, a trusted network may also be inferred using SIM or
network operator supplied information.

NEW:
In some deployments, a trusted network may also be inferred using
information supplied by a Subscriber Identity Module (SIM) or the network
operator.


13) Section 6.1.8

OLD:
Even if it is possible to deploy network-level controls, it SHOULD be used
in conjunction with other controls outlined in this document to achieve
defense in depth.

NEW:
Even if it is possible to deploy network-level controls, they SHOULD be
used in conjunction with other controls outlined in this document to
achieve defense in depth.


Section 6.1.11

OLD:
Therefore, it should be used along with other techniques to provide a
defense-in-depth defense against cross-device attacks.

NEW:
Therefore, they should be used along with other techniques to provide
defense in depth against cross-device attacks.


14) Section 6.2.1.4

OLD:
In addition to the security considerations section in the standard, it is
RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in this document
be considered, especially mitigations that can help establish proximity or
prevent attackers from obtaining QR or user codes.

NEW:
In addition to the Security Considerations section in [RFC8628], it is
RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in this document
be considered, especially mitigations that can help establish proximity or
prevent attackers from obtaining QR or user codes.


Section 6.2.2.4

OLD:
In addition to the security considerations section in the standard, it is
RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in this document
be considered, especially mitigations that can help establish proximity or
prevent attackers from initiating authorization requests.

NEW:
In addition to the Security Considerations section in [CIBA], it is
RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in this document
be considered, especially mitigations that can help establish proximity or
prevent attackers from initiating authorization requests.


15) Section 6.2.2.2

OLD:
Less susceptible to unauthenticated channel attacks, but still vulnerable
to attackers who know or can guess the user identifier and initiate an
attack as described in Section 4.3.4.1.

NEW:
CIBA is less susceptible to unauthenticated channel attacks, but it is
still vulnerable to attackers who know or can guess the user identifier and
initiate an attack as described in Section 4.3.4.1.


16) Section 6.2.3.2

OLD:
The CDA flow proves proximity by leveraging BLE advertisements for service
establishment, significantly reducing the susceptibility to any of the
exploits described in examples 1-6.

NEW:
The CDA flow proves proximity by leveraging BLE advertisements for service
establishment, significantly reducing the susceptibility to any of the
exploits described in examples B1-B6 in Section 4.3.


17) References

a) Please alphabetize the references.

b) The updates to [W3CWebAuthn], [OpenID.VP], [OpenID.Core], and
[W3C.DCAPI] look correct.

c) The update to [NEWDCPHISH] looks correct.

d) The update to [DCATTACK] looks correct.


18) Global terminology

OLD:
Mixed use of "Authorization Server" and "authorization server".

NEW:
Use "Authorization Server" consistently.


OLD:
Mixed use of "sender-constrained tokens" and "sender-constraining tokens".

NEW:
Use "sender-constrained tokens" consistently.


OLD:
Mixed forms of "defense in depth".

NEW:
Use "defense in depth" as a noun phrase and "defense-in-depth" when used
attributively. No definition in Section 1.4 is needed.


OLD:
Pattern names use inconsistent capitalization.

NEW:
Capitalize pattern names consistently, including:
User-Transferred Session Data Pattern
Backchannel-Transferred Session Pattern
User-Transferred Authorization Data Pattern
Cross-Device Session Transfer Pattern


OLD:
Device Authorization Grant
Authorization Code Grant
Authorization Code Flow

NEW:
device authorization grant
authorization code grant
authorization code flow

No changes are required to the different forms of "user code" and "QR code"
listed in question 18(d).


19) Abbreviations

a) "Proof Key for Code Exchange (PKCE)" is correct.

b) Section 6.1.7

OLD:
Trusted devices MAY have their identities rooted in hardware (e.g., a TPM
or equivalent technology).

NEW:
Trusted devices MAY have their identities rooted in hardware (e.g., a
Trusted Platform Module (TPM) or equivalent technology).


SIM is expanded in the response to question 12.

FAPI has no current official expansion. Please refer to it as "OpenID
FAPI". If a link is useful, the working group page is
https://openid.net/wg/fapi/.

SATMC is the name of the tool and should remain unexpanded.

c) Global

OLD:
Client-Initiated Backchannel Authentication is expanded repeatedly.

NEW:
Expand the first occurrence as "Client-Initiated Backchannel Authentication
(CIBA)" and use "CIBA" thereafter.


20) Global

The terms "native client" and "native apps" should remain unchanged.

OLD:
traditional phishing attacks

NEW:
conventional phishing attacks


Thank you,
*Pieter, Daniel, and Filip*

On Fri, 31 Jul 2026 at 06:42, <[email protected]> wrote:

> Authors,
>
> While reviewing this document during Final Review, please resolve (as
> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>
> 1) <!--[rfced] This document has been assigned a new BCP number.  Please
> let us
> know if this is not correct (i.e., it should be part of an existing BCP).
>
> See the complete list of BCPs here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/bcps
> -->
>
>
> 2) <!-- [rfced] May we update the document title as follows to align with
> other RFC
> titles that include "Best Current Practice"?
>
> Original:
>   Cross-Device Flows: Security Best Current Practice
>
> Perhaps:
>   Best Current Practice for Security of Cross-Device Flows
> -->
>
>
> 3) <!-- [rfced] In the text below, how may we clarify "and scanned by"?
>
> Original:
>    This flow may be streamlined by rendering the
>    session transfer code as a QR code on the Authorization Device and
>    scanned by the Consumption Device.
>
> Perhaps A:
>    This flow may be streamlined by rendering the
>    session transfer code as a QR code on the Authorization Device and
>    scanning it with the Consumption Device.
>
> Perhaps B:
>    This flow may be streamlined by rendering the
>    session transfer code as a QR code on the Authorization Device that is
>    scanned by the Consumption Device.
> -->
>
>
> 4) <!-- [rfced] How may we clarify "(e.g., [OpenID.SIOPV2])" here? Is the
> intent
> "(e.g., as described in [OpenID.SIOPV2])"?
>
> Original:
>    These flows are
>    often used to add new devices to a network, onboard customers to a
>    mobile application, or provision new credentials (e.g.,
>    [OpenID.SIOPV2]).
>
> Perhaps:
>    These flows are
>    often used to add new devices to a network, onboard customers to a
>    mobile application, or provision new credentials (e.g., as described in
>    [OpenID.SIOPV2]).
> -->
>
>
> 5) <!-- [rfced] The term "authorization endpoint" is listed in Section 1.4
> but is
> not used elsewhere in the document. Should it be removed from Section 1.4?
> -->
>
>
> 6) <!-- [rfced] Should Section 5 be mentioned in this paragraph? If so,
> please
> provide the text.
>
> Current:
>    Section 3 provides details about susceptible protocols, and Section 4
>    provides attack descriptions.  Section 6.1 provides details about the
>    security mechanisms and mitigations, Section 6.2 provides protocol
>    selection guidance, and Section 6.3 provides details from formal
>    analysis of protocols that apply to cross-device flows.
> -->
>
>
> 7) <!-- [rfced] We note empty parentheses in the section title below. We
> have
> removed them, but please review and let us know if you would like to add
> any
> text to them. We see that other subsections of Section 3.3 have
> parentheses that
> indicate the applicable pattern.
>
> Original:
>
>   3.3.8.  Example A8: Access a Productivity Application ()
> -->
>
>
> 8) <!-- [rfced] May we move "in real time" as shown below to improve the
> flow of
> this sentence?
>
> Original:
>    The attacker creates a
>    phishing website which will in real time capture log-in QR Codes from
>    the original website and present these to the user.
>
> Perhaps:
>    The attacker creates a
>    phishing website, which will capture login QR codes from
>    the original website and present them to the user in real time.
> -->
>
>
> 9) <!-- [rfced] May we update this sentence to avoid using "techniques"
> twice?
>
> Original:
>    An authorization server MAY use techniques such as device
>    fingerprinting, network address or other techniques to detect if a
>    cross-device protocol is being used on the same device.
>
> Perhaps:
>    An authorization server MAY use device
>    fingerprinting, network address, or other techniques to detect if a
>    cross-device protocol is being used on the same device.
> -->
>
>
> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether the note in Section 6.1.1 (i.e.,
> the text
> prefaced with "Note:") should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as
> "a
> container for content that is semantically less important or tangential to
> the
> content that surrounds it" (
> https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
> -->
>
>
> 11) <!-- [rfced] Should "of user, QR and authorization data" be updated as
> follows?
>
> Original:
>    Some scenarios may require legitimate re-transmission
>    of user, QR and authorization data (e.g., retries).
>
> Perhaps:
>    Some scenarios may require legitimate retransmission
>    of user codes, QR codes, and authorization data (e.g., retries).
> -->
>
>
> 12) <!-- [rfced] Is the information supplied by the network operator
> (Perhaps
> A) or by SIM or the network operator (Perhaps B)?
>
> Original:
>    In some deployments a trusted network may also
>    be inferred using SIM or network operator supplied information.
>
> Perhaps A:
>    In some deployments, a trusted network may also
>    be inferred using SIM or information supplied by the network operator.
>
> Perhaps B:
>    In some deployments, a trusted network may also
>    be inferred using information supplied by SIM or the network operator.
> -->
>
>
> 13) <!-- [rfced] We have a question about "it SHOULD", which appears in
> the second
> sentence of each block of text below (first sentence is included for
> context).
> Should "it SHOULD" be updated to "they SHOULD", "this mitigation SHOULD",
> or
> something similar? We believe that the pronoun "it" refers to
> "network-level
> controls" in the first text block and to "rate limits" in the second text
> block.
>
> Original:
>    *Limitations:* Network level controls may not always be feasible,
>    especially when dealing with consumer scenarios where the network may
>    not be under control of the service provider.  Even if it is possible
>    to deploy network level controls, it SHOULD be used in conjunction
>    with other controls outlined in this document to achieve defence in-
>    depth.
>    ...
>    *Limitations:* Rate limits are effective at slowing an attacker down
>    and help to degrade scaled attacks, but they do not prevent more
>    targeted attacks that are executed with lower volumes and velocity.
>    Therefore, it should be used along with other techniques to provide a
>    defense-in-depth defense against cross-device attacks.
>
> Perhaps:
>    *Limitations:* Network-level controls may not always be feasible,
>    especially when dealing with consumer scenarios where the network may
>    not be under control of the service provider.  Even if it is possible
>    to deploy network-level controls, they SHOULD be used in conjunction
>    with other controls outlined in this document to achieve defense in
>    depth.
>    ...
>    *Limitations:* Rate limits are effective at slowing an attacker down
>    and help to degrade scaled attacks, but they do not prevent more
>    targeted attacks that are executed with lower volumes and velocity.
>    Therefore, they should be used along with other techniques to provide a
>    defense-in-depth defense against cross-device attacks.
> -->
>
>
> 14) <!-- [rfced] In the sentences below, would it be helpful to clarify
> "the
> standard"?
>
> Original:
>
>    In addition to the security considerations section in the standard,
>    it is RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in
>    this document be considered, especially mitigations that can help
>    establish proximity or prevent attackers from obtaining QR or user
>    codes.
>    ...
>    In addition to the security considerations section in the standard,
>    it is RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in
>    this document be considered, especially mitigations that can help
>    establish proximity or prevent attackers from initiating
>    authorization requests.
>
> Perhaps:
>
>    In addition to the Security Considerations section in [RFC8628],
>    it is RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in
>    this document be considered, especially mitigations that can help
>    establish proximity or prevent attackers from obtaining QR or user
>    codes.
>    ...
>    In addition to the Security Considerations section in [CIBA],
>    it is RECOMMENDED that one or more of the mitigations outlined in
>    this document be considered, especially mitigations that can help
>    establish proximity or prevent attackers from initiating
>    authorization requests.
> -->
>
>
> 15) <!-- [rfced] What is the subject of the sentence below? Specifically,
> what does
> "less susceptible" refer to?
>
> Original:
>
>    Less susceptible to unauthenticated channel attacks, but still
>    vulnerable to attackers who know or can guess the user identifier and
>    initiate an attack as described in Section 4.3.4.1.
>
> Perhaps:
>
>    CIBA is less susceptible to unauthenticated channel attacks, but it is
> still
>    vulnerable to attackers who know or can guess the user identifier and
>    initiate an attack as described in Section 4.3.4.1.
>
> -->
>
>
> 16) <!-- [rfced] Would adding a section number to indicate where readers
> can find
> examples 1-6 be helpful here? Also, should "examples 1-6" be updated to
> "examples B1-B6"?
>
> Original:
>    The Cross-Device Authentication flow proves proximity by leveraging
>    BLE advertisements for service establishment, significantly reducing
>    the susceptibility to any of the exploits described in Examples 1-6.
>
> Perhaps:
>    The Cross-Device Authentication flow proves proximity by leveraging
>    BLE advertisements for service establishment, significantly reducing
>    the susceptibility to any of the exploits described in examples 1-6
>    in Section 4.3.
> -->
>
>
> 17) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions regarding the
> References
> section of this document:
>
> a) Would you like the references to be alphabetized or left in their
> current order?
>
> b) FYI - The reference entries below contained outdated information based
> on the URLs provided, so we have updated them to match the information
> found at the URLs. Please review the changes made to the following
> reference entries:
>
> [W3CWebAuthn]
> [OpenID.VP]
> [OpenID.Core]
> [W3C.DCAPI]
>
> c) FYI - The original URL for the reference [NEWDCPHISH] is no longer valid
> (
> https://o365blog.com/post/phishing/#new-phishing-technique-device-code-authentication
> ).
> It appears the author moved their blog to a new domain
> (https://x.com/DrAzureAD/status/1579875043563438080). We have updated this
> reference to use the newer URL.
>
> Original:
>    [NEWDCPHISH]
>               Syynimaa, N., "Introducing a new phishing technique for
>               compromising Office 365 accounts", October 2020,
>               <https://o365blog.com/post/phishing/#new-phishing-
>               technique-device-code-authentication>.
>
> Updated:
>    [NEWDCPHISH]
>               Syynimaa, N., "Introducing a new phishing technique for
>               compromising Office 365 accounts", October 2020,
>               <https://aadinternals.com/post/phishing/>.
>
>
> d) FYI - The original URL for the reference [DCATTACK] redirects to an
> updated
> page
> (
> https://www.secureworks.com/blog/oauths-device-code-flow-abused-in-phishing-attacks
> ).
> It appears Secureworks was acquired by Sophos in February 2025
> (https://www.sophos.com/en-us/secureworks-sophos-acquistion).  We have
> updated
> this reference to match the information at the new URL. Please let us know
> if
> you have any objections.
>
> Original:
>    [DCATTACK] Secureworks Counter Threat Unit (CTU), "OAuth's Device
>               Code Flow Abused in Phishing Attacks", August 2021,
>               <https://www.secureworks.com/blog/oauths-device-code-flow-
>               abused-in-phishing-attacks>.
>
> Updated:
>    [DCATTACK] Secureworks Counter Threat Unit Research Team, "OAuth's
>               Device Code Flow Abused in Phishing Attacks", June 2021,
>               <https://www.sophos.com/en-us/blog/oauths-device-code-
>               flow-abused-in-phishing-attacks>.
> -->
>
>
> 18) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>
> a) We note inconsistencies in the terms below throughout the text. Should
> these
> be uniform? If so, please let us know which form is preferred.
>
> Authorization Server
> authorization server
>
> sender-constrained tokens
> sender-constraining tokens
>
> defense in depth
> defence in-depth
> defence-in-depth defence
>   Note: We updated to use "defense" (with "s"). We see that the NIST
> Glossary, which is an informative reference for this document, uses
> "defense-in-depth" with hyphens (see
> https://csrc.nist.gov/glossary/term/defense_in_depth). This term has not
> been used often in the RFC Series. We see a few instances of "defense in
> depth" (open) and "defense-in-depth" (hyphenated) in published RFCs. The
> hyphenated forms are mostly used in the attributive position (i.e., before
> a noun) such as "defense-in-depth approach". Also will readers know what
> this term means? Should it  be added to Section 1.4 ("Conventions and
> Terminology")?
>
>
> b) In general text, should the names of patterns be capitalized or
> lowercased? We
> see both forms in the document.
>
> Lowercase:
>    Examples of the user-transferred authorization data pattern include
>    flows in which the Consumption Device requests the Authorization
>    Server ...
>
>    In the backchannel-transferred session pattern, the client requests
>    the authorization server to authenticate the user and obtain
>    authorization for an action.
>
>    In cross-device flows that follow the user-transferred authorization
>    data pattern, the client ...
>
>    Attackers exploit the user-transferred authorization data pattern by
>    combining the social engineering techniques ...
>
> Capitalized:
>    ... using the Backchannel-Transferred Session pattern only after
>    the user is already authenticated and attempts a high-value
>    transaction.
>
>    In the User-Transferred Session Data Pattern, users MAY enter out-of-
>    band information on the Consumption Device to start the authorization
>    process.
>
>    ... on the primary device (Backchannel-Transferred Session
>    Pattern, Section 3.1.2).
>
>    ... to approve the authentication
>    attempt on the primary device (User-Transferred Session Data
>    Pattern, Section 3.1.1).
>
>
> c) Would you like to make the following capitalization changes per usage
> in RFCs
> 8628 and 6749? Or do you prefer the current capitalization?
>
> "Device Authorization Grant" to "device authorization grant" (per RFC 8628)
> "Authorization Code Grant" to "authorization code grant" (per RFC 6749)
> "Authorization Code Flow" to "authorization code flow" (per RFC 6749)
>
>
> d) We see the following forms in the document; we did not make any changes
> as
> the meaning is clear, but let us know if you would like for the usage to be
> consistent. Note that plurals of these forms also appear in the document.
>
> user code or QR code
> user or QR code
> QR code or user code
> QR or user code
> -->
>
>
> 19) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
>
> a) FYI - We have expanded the following abbreviation per Section 3.6 of
> RFC 7322
> ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review to ensure correctness.
>
> Proof Key for Code Exchange (PKCE)
>
> b) How may we expand the abbreviations below?
>
> TPM
> SIM
> FAPI
> SATMC
>
> c) The abbreviation CIBA is expanded multiple times in the document; in
> fact,
> it is expanded every time it is used except for two instances. Would you
> like
> to expand the first instance in the text and then use the abbreviation
> after?
> -->
>
>
> 20) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
> online
> Style Guide <
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature
> typically
> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>
> For example, please consider whether "native" and "traditional" should be
> updated throughout.
>
> While the NIST website
> <
> https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1
> >
> indicates that "traditional" is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.
> "Traditional" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
>
> -->
>
>
> Thank you.
>
> Kaelin Foody and Rebecca VanRheenen
> RFC Production Center
>
>
> On Jul 30, 2026, at 9:38 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC 10027 (draft-ietf-oauth-cross-device-security)
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> Title            : Cross-Device Flows: Security Best Current Practice
> Author(s)        : P. Kasselman,
>                   D. Fett,
>                   F. Skokan
> WG Chair(s)      : Hannes Tschofenig, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
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