Hi Joshua

Sorry - I missed your email saying you were doing Ch 13.

Jean has commented back on what I said about p 8, but I only had 2 issues.
I didn't read through everything, I skim read the chapter.  Problems noticed
are as follows:

On p8 - Method 1, Quick & Easy, but not recommended.

Do you think it is wise putting in a paragraph when it's not recommended?
It looks odd, especially when on the opposite page there are instructions
for the recommended way of creating a master document.  Personally I would
put the recommended ways of performing a task first and put the one that is
not recommended last.  It gives a better impression of the product.

Throughout - some of the images are black and white, some are colour.  They
should be one or the other for consistency unless it was a fault with the
transfer to pdf.

Claire

On 30 March 2010 08:10, Joshua Tan <[email protected]> wrote:

> Claire just to double check: I'm doing Ch 13 as well and picked up a few
> errors here and there which I'll highlight when I have the time to do so.
>
> Were you just highlighting the problem with the flow of the text, or did
> you
> proofread Ch 13 too?
>
> Joshua
>
> On Tue, Mar 30, 2010 at 7:15 PM, Claire Wood <[email protected]
> >wrote:
>
> > I'll take Ch 8 now - I've emailed the list with the other comments I've
> had
> > on Ch13 & 12.
> >
> > On 30 March 2010 03:58, Claire Wood <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > > Hi, if no-one has any objections, I'll take Ch 14.
> > >
> > > Claire
> > >
> > >   On 30 March 2010 03:37, TJ Frazier <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >
> > >> CH17, Customizing Writer PDF
> > >>
> > >> Typo, P. 14, next-to-last paragraph, "st" -> "set"
> > >>
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Claire Wood

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