Is anyone doing Chapter 7?

On 30 March 2010 08:39, Claire Wood <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi All
>
> Just reviewed Ch 8 and this is my feedback:
>
> Pages 12-13 - there are graphics suspended next to heading titles without a
> description of what they are.  They don't look right and don't really comply
> with the style of the document.
>
> Page 12 - the link to Chapter 17 doesn't work
>
> Pages 26/27/28 - the Notes style have different thicknesses of lines
>
> Page 39 - It doesn't look right to have 2 notes, one after the next.  Is
> there the possiblity of merging them or creating a OOoNotecont style so you
> can have more than 1 paragraph in the Notes style?
> Claire
>   On 30 March 2010 08:21, Claire Wood <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Joshua
>>
>> Sorry - I missed your email saying you were doing Ch 13.
>>
>> Jean has commented back on what I said about p 8, but I only had 2
>> issues.  I didn't read through everything, I skim read the chapter.
>> Problems noticed are as follows:
>>
>> On p8 - Method 1, Quick & Easy, but not recommended.
>>
>> Do you think it is wise putting in a paragraph when it's not recommended?
>> It looks odd, especially when on the opposite page there are instructions
>> for the recommended way of creating a master document.  Personally I would
>> put the recommended ways of performing a task first and put the one that is
>> not recommended last.  It gives a better impression of the product.
>>
>> Throughout - some of the images are black and white, some are colour.
>> They should be one or the other for consistency unless it was a fault with
>> the transfer to pdf.
>>
>> Claire
>>
>>   On 30 March 2010 08:10, Joshua Tan <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>>> Claire just to double check: I'm doing Ch 13 as well and picked up a few
>>> errors here and there which I'll highlight when I have the time to do so.
>>>
>>> Were you just highlighting the problem with the flow of the text, or did
>>> you
>>> proofread Ch 13 too?
>>>
>>> Joshua
>>>
>>> On Tue, Mar 30, 2010 at 7:15 PM, Claire Wood <[email protected]
>>> >wrote:
>>>
>>> > I'll take Ch 8 now - I've emailed the list with the other comments I've
>>> had
>>> > on Ch13 & 12.
>>> >
>>> > On 30 March 2010 03:58, Claire Wood <[email protected]>
>>> wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > Hi, if no-one has any objections, I'll take Ch 14.
>>> > >
>>> > > Claire
>>> > >
>>> > >   On 30 March 2010 03:37, TJ Frazier <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> > >
>>> > >> CH17, Customizing Writer PDF
>>> > >>
>>> > >> Typo, P. 14, next-to-last paragraph, "st" -> "set"
>>> > >>
>>> > >> --
>>> > >> /tj/
>>> > >>
>>> > >>
>>> > >>
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>> Claire Wood
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