Hi All Just reviewed Ch 8 and this is my feedback:
Pages 12-13 - there are graphics suspended next to heading titles without a description of what they are. They don't look right and don't really comply with the style of the document. Page 12 - the link to Chapter 17 doesn't work Pages 26/27/28 - the Notes style have different thicknesses of lines Page 39 - It doesn't look right to have 2 notes, one after the next. Is there the possiblity of merging them or creating a OOoNotecont style so you can have more than 1 paragraph in the Notes style? Claire On 30 March 2010 08:21, Claire Wood <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Joshua > > Sorry - I missed your email saying you were doing Ch 13. > > Jean has commented back on what I said about p 8, but I only had 2 issues. > I didn't read through everything, I skim read the chapter. Problems noticed > are as follows: > > On p8 - Method 1, Quick & Easy, but not recommended. > > Do you think it is wise putting in a paragraph when it's not recommended? > It looks odd, especially when on the opposite page there are instructions > for the recommended way of creating a master document. Personally I would > put the recommended ways of performing a task first and put the one that is > not recommended last. It gives a better impression of the product. > > Throughout - some of the images are black and white, some are colour. They > should be one or the other for consistency unless it was a fault with the > transfer to pdf. > > Claire > > On 30 March 2010 08:10, Joshua Tan <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Claire just to double check: I'm doing Ch 13 as well and picked up a few >> errors here and there which I'll highlight when I have the time to do so. >> >> Were you just highlighting the problem with the flow of the text, or did >> you >> proofread Ch 13 too? >> >> Joshua >> >> On Tue, Mar 30, 2010 at 7:15 PM, Claire Wood <[email protected] >> >wrote: >> >> > I'll take Ch 8 now - I've emailed the list with the other comments I've >> had >> > on Ch13 & 12. >> > >> > On 30 March 2010 03:58, Claire Wood <[email protected]> wrote: >> > >> > > Hi, if no-one has any objections, I'll take Ch 14. >> > > >> > > Claire >> > > >> > > On 30 March 2010 03:37, TJ Frazier <[email protected]> wrote: >> > > >> > >> CH17, Customizing Writer PDF >> > >> >> > >> Typo, P. 14, next-to-last paragraph, "st" -> "set" >> > >> >> > >> -- >> > >> /tj/ >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> > >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: >> > [email protected] >> > >> For additional commands, e-mail: >> > >> [email protected] >> > >> >> > >> >> > > >> > > >> > > -- >> > > Best wishes >> > > >> > > Claire Wood >> > > >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > Best wishes >> > >> > Claire Wood >> > >> > > > > -- > Best wishes > > Claire Wood > -- Best wishes Claire Wood
