This looks really nice overall---a few suggestions

(1) I think a sans-serif font looks better as the base font. A matter  
of taste, I suppose. But I think that it's generally clearer for a web  
page, as opposed to reading a book or article. It looks cleaner too.

(2) Maybe this is what you mention with the screen shots---they come  
up pretty slowly, for one thing, but something more important---the  
big comment at the bottom appears a single line, which is wider than  
the screen. I don't know if it's possible to make this wrap, or else  
maybe just shorten the text.

(3) In the download links area, the word "build" appears by itself on  
a new line. Shouldn't this all be kept on one line? Maybe the word  
"download" is unnecessary in "older download" and "newer download",  
since it's all under the heading "downloads," and since links  
consisting of the version number are pretty much self-documenting.

(3.5) Radical proposal: Make the downloads links the same width at the  
main text; move the sidebar with the screen shots up so that it's  
flush with the top edge of the main text, i.e., the top of where the  
downloads links are.

(4) The raised dot before "Mac Bibliography editor" makes it look like  
".Mac bibliography editor."

(5) Should it say something about BibTeX on the home page?

(6) Should it say something about managing PDF's and other attached  
files, managing references, and in general organizing them? This is  
something we're always saying seems to come as a surprise to users.

I think that Reference manager or bibliography management tool or  
something else probably a better description than bibliography editor.

(In the above two comments, I mean, should it say something more  
prominent about these things---it does say something in the main text,  
but that's probably the last thing people will look at---I think a  
bullet list of features like on the current home page is better.)

Great job on this, I hope you appreciate the comments from someone who  
is definitely way too neurotic about web page design/architecture.

On Mar 4, 2009, at 2:09 AM, Sven-S. Porst wrote:

> … moving the discussion from the bug tracker to this more accessible
> venue:
>
> I started looking into cleaning up the BibDesk home page and put a
> first attempt here:
>
>       http://earthlingsoft.net/ssp/bibdesk/bibdesk/
>
> It's still unfinished (the screenshot zooming doesn't work reliably,
> the font choices may deserve further thought and testing) and this
> would be a good opportunity to add comments/critiques before I try to
> get the details right.
>
> I'd also like to know whether or not bandwidth usage is an issue, so
> the design can be more conservative if needed.
>
> Best
>
>               Sven
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