On 05/11/10 13:15, jean.mccormack wrote:
You can find the updated transfer checkpoint module doc at:
http://hub.opensolaris.org/bin/view/Project+caiman/CUE_docs
Please get any further comments to me by COB Thursday May 13th.
Jean
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Hi Jean,
Section 1
o Second paragraph refers to 3.4.2.1 for an explanation of reasons for using API
interface, but the reasons are actually in in 3.4.4.
o "various different" -> "various"
page 6
left to the reader?
section 3.2 Constraints has no text
section 3.3
Is create_transfer a class? Sounds more like a method. Also maybe add a heading
for methods?
section 3.4.5
Now sure if appropriate for this doc, but are alternate admin files handled
somewhere to avoid user interaction for svr4 packaging commands?
3.4.5.2
sVR4->SVR4
section 4 nits
thismay -> this may
packages-based -> package-based
specified packages set->specified package set
Sue
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