Hi Ethan,

I took a look at your document, in general it looks pretty good...

Naturally though, there are some comments:

5.1.1 <configuration> element

    You mention here that there are two URI schemas supported, while file://
    doesn't present a large problem, I'm wondering about http:// URIs, since
    right now the AI client doesn't do any fetching from remote URLs - it's
    the manifest/locator service that does that.

    Is there the expectation that this will be handled by the AI client
    itself, or will the manifest/locator service be enhanced to to the
    fetching of the URIs by extracting them from the manifest?

5.1.2 Structure of zone configuration files

    ai_manifest.xml
        Based on the comments in 5.2.1, and given that there is a difference
        it the AI manifest tags when applying them to zones, should we
        consider having a separate DTD such as ai_zones.dtd?


    sysidcfg
        The text here implies that sysidcfg isn't being used for S11, which I
        believe is correct, but I think it might be worth mentioning
        explicitly.

    You mention that the "AI" will need to validate the required files, but
    isn't it more correct to say that they will be validated by the
    "Configuration Validation" checkpoint?

5.1.3 Processing the <configuration> elements

    NIT: In the list of AI->CUD checkpoints, the "Transfer IPS" should really be
    one or more Transfer (not specifically IPS) checkpoints, depending on the
    contents of the AI Manifest.

    Ginnie document on ICTs is a more complete list of ICT checkpoints now,
    obsoleting the list in the AI document. After "Transfer Logs" there is now
    a "Create Snapshot" checkpoint (to create the @install checkpoint).

5.1.3.1.1 Validating the zone 'config' files

    The references to "AI Client" should most likely be "this checkpoint"
    here.

5.1.3.1.2 Validating the zone 'ai_manifest.xml' files

    Based on the comments in 5.2.1, and similar to in 5.1.2 above, I think it
    makes sense to have a separate ai_zones.dtd file to handle the syntactic
    differences.

5.1.4 Structure of installed zone configuration files

    Should "the installer" be "this checkpoint"?

5.2 Using the AI client to install zones

    In the list of checkpoints to be executed (and thus it's in the list of
    checkpoints not to be executed) Target Discovery is missing.

    I think that Target Discovery should still be run, but with the
    restricting as it is in DC that it only discovers zpools, datasets and
    BEs. This would be useful for validation purposes later.

    The zone_rpool_dataset that is passed with the -Z option should be placed
    into the Data Object Cache so that checkpoints can find it when required.

    I notice that there isn't a TargetSelection checkpoint being used - it's
    at this point that things are moved around between the Target.DISCOVERED
    tree and the imported Manifest to the Target.DESIRED tree that TI
    requires it's information to be in. This would be where you would add the
    new structure of BE and datasets for TI to create for you.

5.2.1 Manifest Validation Zone

    I think that this checkpoint wouldn't be necessarily different if the AI
    manifest for a zones install was simply a different DTD.

    Where there is overlap between the DTDs maybe we could break re-organise
    things such that the AI and AI_Zones DTDs should share common elements.

5.2.2 Target Instantiation Zone

    I'm not sure why this is different to standard the standard TI checkpoint.

    I can't see good reason that things can't be common if the information
    that is passed to TI doesn't tell it to create a new rpool (i.e. the
    action != "create", but instead just tells it to add datasets.

    Yes, it's possible that the TI code will need changes to do this
    perfectly, but I'm not sure it warrants a new checkpoint but more of a
    refinement of the existing one.

    As mentioned in 5.2 above, you will likely need some checkpoint to create
    the Target.DESIRED tree for TI to get it's instructions from.

5.2.2.1 libbe::be_init_nested_be()

    I think that the standard TI above could handle this fairly simply if the
    BE to be created is a zone BE as opposed to a boot BE. It could even
    toggle it's use based on the locating of the zone_zpool_dataset in the
    DOC.

5.2.3 Initialise SMF Zone

    Again, I'm not sure if there is a need for another checkpoint - the
    difference is very small - and could hinge on the specification of the
    zone_zpool_dataset in the DOC.

5.2.4 Transfer Logs Zone

    I think this requirement could be mitigated by the standard CUD checkpoint
    just doing the same thing and using /var/run/auto_install.<pid>/* for it's
    logs during an install.

    I would be interesting to know if people think this would be wrong for a
    standard install to use...

Thanks,

Darren.


On 14/02/2011 21:39, Ethan Quach wrote:
> All,
>
> I have uploaded the design document for AI Zones support into the
> caiman-docs gate.
>
> http://src.opensolaris.org/source/xref/caiman/caiman-docs/AI/AI_Zones_Design.odt
>
>
> General review appreciated, and if so, please try to get me comments by
> the end of the week; but I have also pinged individuals to review
> particular parts of the document.
>
>
> thanks,
> -ethan
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