On 02/18/11 15:39, Jack Schwartz wrote:
Hi Ethan.
Thanks for your reply. No further comments on items removed from this
email. A few more comments below...
On 02/17/11 11:08 AM, Ethan Quach wrote:
5.1.3.1.1:
- top of page 7: s/success of failure/success or failure/g
- Last PP: I don't understand how this could be a future
enhancement. How come the zonecfg zfs_report-ed data sets are not
needed to carry out the install of NGZs when the GZ is installed by AI?
See the paragraph before this. If this occurs, its considered an
invalid zone config. This was OK'ed by the zones team.
OK. I reread and see now... Currently zfs_report needs to concur
with what is in the manifest. An RFE would be to add new dirs
reported by zfs_report to the manifest.
5.1.4:
- Nit: 1st PP: get rid of comma before
svc:/system/zones/install:default.
- 1st PP: by "mimic" do you mean "be a copy of"? If yes, saying so
would be clearer.
I'll change the sentence to say: " The files underneath that
directory are defined exactly as they are defined for the source zone
configuration files for the <configuration> tag in section 5.1.2."
This sentence is hard to parse. I suggest something like:
"The files underneath that directory are the same as those defined in
section 5.1.2"
Sure, that sounds a little better.
thanks,
-ethan
Thanks,
Jack
http://src.opensolaris.org/source/xref/caiman/caiman-docs/AI/AI_Zones_Design.odt
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