grammar error:

"*We're out to knock your socks off & take your breath away.*With 
research-driven marketing strategies. Mind-blowing creative. And 
rock-solid results. <agency.cfm>"

Shouldn't that be "Mind-blowing creativity"?

A couple of comments:

I had to dig in a couple of pages before I understood what 
austin-williams does, it's not clear from the outset. While that front 
splash is visually cool, it doesn't convey what the company does.

A personal peeve, I hate the Times font or anything that looks like it, 
I'd change the font on the left side navigation.
BTW: I was really expecting it to be an accordion type of navigation.

overall, it looks good, but could get the message across quicker and 
more urgently.

Robert Harrison wrote:
> We've just launched our own new site. It's fully CF driven from MS SQL DB.
>
> If you want to see it, it's at: http://www.austin-williams.com 
>
> We've got some cool stuff in there.
>
> Enjoy!
>
>
> Robert B. Harrison
> Director of Interactive services
> Austin & Williams
> 125 Kennedy Drive, Suite 100 Hauppauge NY 11788
> T : 631.231.6600 Ext. 119 
> F : 631.434.7022
> www.austin-williams.com
>
> Great advertising can't be either/or... It must be &.
>
>
>
>
> 

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