[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382?page=comments#action_12314441 ]
Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-382: ------------------------------------- Stan's review of: %%% Reference Guide: J2EE Compliance section (HTML) >> ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta16677.html The subject links (three bulleted links) appear twice on the page >> remove one set >> ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html ** Replace the following Into paragraph with the new Intro text below. Old: J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development of enterprise applications; one example is Enterprise Java Beans (EJBs) with distributed capabilities. ** NEW: J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development of enterprise applications based on reusable components in a multi-tier environment. In addition to the features of the Java 2 Platform, Standard Edition (J2SE) J2EE adds support for Enterprise Java Beans (EJBs), Java Server Pages (JSPs), Servlets, XML and many more. The J2EE architecture is used to bring together existing technologies and enterprise applications in a single, manageable environment. [ NOTE: this intro is also included in the Dev Guide at: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html ] >> ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html ** Remove this line - it is no longer true" (Derby also supports the JTA API, which is not a current J2EE requirement, but this functionality provides another piece of the same system.) [ NOTE: this line is also included in the Dev Guide at: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html ] ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta94396.html ** THREE (3) OCCURANCES of spurious characters (possibly the trademark character originally?): search for: "Java™ 2 Platform" >>>>> REPLACE WITH: "Java 2 Platform" ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta1003463.html ** Replace this NOTE with the supplied text: OLD: Note: Derby's XADataSources can only be embedded. No remote (client/server) support is provided. ** NEW: Note: Use the Network Client driver's XA DataSource interface (org.apache.derby.jdbc.ClientXADataSource) when XA support is required in a remote (client/server) environment. > Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual > ---------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-382 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382 > Project: Derby > Type: Improvement > Components: Documentation > Environment: all > Reporter: Jeff Levitt > Priority: Minor > Fix For: 10.1.1.0 > > This issue tracks comments for the Derby Reference Manual. The deadline for > posting comments is Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time. > Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are: > - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever > possible. Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to > <modified>" instead of generic comments like "This section needs to be > rewritten." > - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in > the review comment. Obtain the URL like this: > * highlight the topic in the left frame > * right click > * choose "Properties" > * copy and paste the address in the pop up box. > - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment: > * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is > the PDF sheet number or the printed page number. > * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in > a subsection, try to include the hierarchy of titles. > - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match > up that copy with the underlying DITA source. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
