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Ramandeep Kaur commented on DERBY-382:
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I reviewed Derby Reference Manual -->Derby Limitations section and following
are some of the comments/suggestions.
1. All the tables in this section has number "1" only. Each table should have
its own number.
2. At the footer of document, might need to add Manual name and main section
name so that it is easier to see which guide and a section a particular page
belongs to.
3. Right above each table of this section, the line "The following table
contains limitations ...................................." might be
"The following table lists limitations ......................".
4. In subsection "Limitations for Database Manager values", some of the rows in
first column has most in it. For example: "Most columns in a table". Should it
be "Maximum columns in a table"
Thanks, Raman
> Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
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>
> Key: DERBY-382
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382
> Project: Derby
> Type: Improvement
> Components: Documentation
> Environment: all
> Reporter: Jeff Levitt
> Priority: Minor
> Fix For: 10.1.1.0
>
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