Great work on these, Emma.  My preference is for V3.2.

On Thu, Oct 19, 2023 at 2:37 PM Emma K <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I uploaded some new images to the Jira issue here <
> https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AVRO-3554> to visually capture the
> suggestions for adjusting the upward angle design.
>
> I wanted to show what it looks like if the upward angle of the plane logo
> is changed so that the underside is visible. The problem is that the blobby
> bits of the tail block the underside of the plane when adjusted to this new
> angle and make the design less clean and even less obvious as to what the
> icon is, which is why in the original upward design V11.2 I didn't add any
> underside and instead opted for a cleaner but more abstract representation
> of the plane icon.
>
> I also wanted to show what it looks like if I just rotate the V9.2 design
> to an upward angle with no other changes. This also doesn't work, because
> the flow of the blobs isn't right for this orientation and the underside of
> the plane isn't right for this angle.
>
> To clarify a bit on what I wrote previously, I said that it was valid and
> made sense that the marketing booth preferred the upward-angle design. When
> I said that, I did not mean to suggest that the upward angle was better
> than the other designs, what I meant to do was just validate that it was
> okay for them to have that preference! The thing that's hard about design
> is that it's so subjective and everyone will have their own unique opinions
> on what looks better.
>
> But again, I want to make sure that the logo is something that the *Avro
> community* loves and agrees upon! I'm worried that the passing subjective
> preference of the marketing and publicity office at the Community Over Code
> conference is casting its own 'shadow vote' here which is taking away from
> the gut feelings of the Avro community as a whole. I would just like to
> encourage everyone to pick the design they like best in the final vote,
> because at the end of the day, the logo that's chosen will ultimately be
> what represents Avro the project, and you as the contributors, not the
> marketing and publicity office.
>
> To conclude, I don't think I'll be doing any additional revisions of the
> icons themselves in the future, so the options for the logos will be V9.2
> (or V.11.2 if you want an upward angle) and V3.2. I will be uploading some
> revisions for the font used in the final design (once a winner is chosen)
> to see if there is a better alternative on that front, but otherwise, the
> icon designs themselves will remain the same. Thanks again for all your
> patience and feedback throughout the process!
>
> All my best,
>
> Emma
>
> On Thu, Oct 19, 2023 at 5:22 AM Fokko Driesprong <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> > Great work again!
> >
> > > Based on what I was taught when studying graphic design, icons for
> logos
> > > should be memorable and have the simplest possible design to convey the
> > > desired image
> >
> >
> > Thanks for the background information Emma, this makes a lot of sense to
> > me.
> >
> > This is, I believe, because the angle of V11.2 hides the underside: this
> > > makes the plane look incomplete.
> >
> > I agree, it is not obvious that it is a paper plane (which I like as a
> > reference, because of childhood :) Both the pigeon and the paper plane
> are
> > awesome. Maybe the plane is a bit more timeless, while the pigeon might
> > bring up IP over Avian Carriers
> > <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IP_over_Avian_Carriers>.
> >
> > I'll vote for V9.2 pointing slightly upwards as well.
> >
> > Kind regards,
> > Fokko
> >
> >
> > Op di 17 okt 2023 om 14:54 schreef Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <
> > [email protected]>:
> >
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > The results yesterday show that V9.2 is perceived as better than V11.2,
> > > despite being angled downward. This is, I believe, because the angle of
> > > V11.2 hides the underside: this makes the plane look incomplete.
> > >
> > > My vote is for V9.2 if changed to fly upward, V3.1 otherwise.
> > >
> > >
> > > Kind regards,
> > > Oscar
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > On Mon, 16 Oct 2023 at 21:46, Emma K <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >
> > > > Hi all,
> > > >
> > > > Thank you for your kind words throughout the process and vote! I
> wanted
> > > to
> > > > refrain from jumping in earlier lest I accidentally influenced the
> > > initial
> > > > vote in any way!
> > > >
> > > > Just wanted to hop in now and give my thoughts on the suggestions
> Ryan
> > > > received at the Community Over Code conference and Oscar's suggestion
> > of
> > > > another possible upwards variant.
> > > >
> > > > I'll start with Oscar's suggestion first, which also ties into the
> > first
> > > > point of advice Ryan received from the marketing and publicity
> office.
> > If
> > > > we'd like to follow ASF's marketing team's intuition that the upward
> > > design
> > > > of 11.2 is better than the downward design of 9.2 I think that's
> valid
> > > and
> > > > makes sense! If this is the case, then I would suggest we use the
> 11.2
> > > > design rather than the 9.2 design, and I can make some slight
> > adjustments
> > > > to the angle of the plane as we see fit. I'll add that I am a little
> > more
> > > > hesitant about this approach only because the 11.2 design did not
> beat
> > > out
> > > > or tie with the votes of design 9.2 in the first round of voting, and
> > > > ultimately I would like the final logo to be something that the
> > community
> > > > as a whole loves and agrees upon!
> > > >
> > > > The next suggestion Ryan received was based on the PT Mono font
> being a
> > > > little strange for the word 'Avro' as the r is the only serifed
> letter.
> > > > This is something I didn't notice before but they are right! I
> actually
> > > > already have five other fonts on the backburner that I tried when I
> was
> > > > drafting the original design versions but I personally liked the PT
> > Mono
> > > > font the best so gave that as the only option (which in hindsight
> might
> > > not
> > > > have been the best choice). What I can do is once the final icon is
> > > chosen
> > > > as the winner (either the plane or the pigeon) I can draft up a few
> > more
> > > > versions with the alternate font choices and we can decide if one of
> > the
> > > > other fonts will work better in the long run.
> > > >
> > > > Finally, in terms of the last suggestion from the marketing and
> > publicity
> > > > office of having the word Avro in the plane's dark blue, I have to
> > > > respectfully disagree with this assessment. The area of dark blue in
> > the
> > > > plane icons is so small that even at large sizes it would be
> difficult
> > to
> > > > read 'Avro' if it was there, and at small sizes, it would be
> impossible
> > > to
> > > > parse. Based on what I was taught when studying graphic design, icons
> > for
> > > > logos should be memorable and have the simplest possible design to
> > convey
> > > > the desired image. As an example of this, think of Apple's logo,
> which
> > > is a
> > > > simplistic apple icon with a chunk missing. I would posit that if
> Apple
> > > > wrote 'Apple' on their icon, it wouldn't be nearly as effective.
> > > >
> > > > That's my 2¢ anyways! I'm happy to make more adjustments to the fonts
> > and
> > > > the angles of the icons as we see fit, and I'm so excited to see
> which
> > > > design will be the final winner in the end! :D
> > > >
> > > > All my best,
> > > >
> > > > Emma
> > > >
> > > > On Mon, Oct 16, 2023 at 12:33 PM Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <
> > > > [email protected]> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Hi all,
> > > > >
> > > > > The results are in: with 6 binding votes (all cast within 6 hours),
> > and
> > > > no
> > > > > non-binding votes, it's a near-tie between V9.2 and V3.1.
> > > > >
> > > > > These are the votes:
> > > > >
> > > > >    - V9.2: 3 votes
> > > > >    - V10.2: 1 vote
> > > > >    - V11.2: 0 votes
> > > > >    - V3.1: 2 votes (I changed the vote for V6.1, as the V3.1
> variant
> > > was
> > > > >    part of the vote)
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > What's next: one week to vote by simple majority between V9.2 and
> > V3.1.
> > > > > (given our quick votes last time, it's probably more than enough)
> > > > >
> > > > > Then, if we choose for V9.2, perhaps Emma can also create a good
> > > version
> > > > > flying
> > > > > slightly upward
> > > > > <
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
> https://clipart-library.com/newhp/31-316437_transparent-airplane-clipart-paper-airplane-clipart-png-png.png
> > > > > >
> > > > > instead
> > > > > of steeply like V11.2. I think we can leave it up to her good
> > judgement
> > > > to
> > > > > determine if that's really an improvement.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > So, which do you like more: the plane V9.2, or the pigeon V3.1?
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Kind regards,
> > > > > Oscar
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > On Mon, 9 Oct 2023 at 22:54, Ryan Skraba <[email protected]> wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > > Hello! I don't want to derail the conversation or vote, but I had
> > the
> > > > > > opportunity to attend the marketing and publicity office hours
> > during
> > > > the
> > > > > > community over Code conference. They had some pretty specific
> > > > suggestions
> > > > > > (but not requirements of course). I'm on my phone but I just want
> > to
> > > > > > capture them here!
> > > > > >
> > > > > > 1. Plane going up is better than down!
> > > > > > 2. PT Mono is peculiar for our specific word because the r has
> > serifs
> > > > and
> > > > > > the others don't.
> > > > > > 3. If we use the arrow, it would look great to have the word Avro
> > in
> > > > the
> > > > > > plane's dark blue!
> > > > > >
> > > > > > It was a neat conversation and they said some really nice things
> > > about
> > > > > the
> > > > > > initiative!
> > > > > >
> > > > > > If we do anything about 2 or 3, we can talk about any adjustments
> > > after
> > > > > the
> > > > > > vote. To be honest, I'm 100% confident with these current logos
> and
> > > > > leaving
> > > > > > any changes to Emma's discretion!
> > > > > >
> > > > > > All my bets Ryan
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Mon, Oct 2, 2023, 13:08 Ryan Blue <[email protected]> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > My vote is for 10.2.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > On Mon, Oct 2, 2023 at 9:02 AM Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <
> > > > > > > [email protected]> wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Hi all,
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Since the start, I've been a fan of the pigeon. It looks
> good,
> > > and
> > > > > it's
> > > > > > > > very distinctive.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > And it's completely different from any send icon, so it
> cannot
> > be
> > > > > > > conflated
> > > > > > > > with a message protocol icon.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > My vote is for V3.1
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Kind regards,
> > > > > > > > Oscar
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > --
> > > > > > > > ✉️ Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <[email protected]>
> > > > > > > > 🌐 https://github.com/opwvhk/
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Op ma 2 okt. 2023 16:47 schreef Ryan Skraba <[email protected]
> >:
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > I can't stop changing my mind, but I'm going to go with
> V9.2
> > > -- I
> > > > > > > > > really like the pigeon too, but I think the paper plane
> fits
> > > too
> > > > > > > > > nicely to pass up!
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Excellent work, Emma, and thanks Oscar for calling the
> vote.
> > I
> > > > > think
> > > > > > > > > your voting proposal makes sense!
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Ryan
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > On Mon, Oct 2, 2023 at 3:59 PM Ismaël Mejía <
> > [email protected]
> > > >
> > > > > > wrote:
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > V9.2
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > Like Fokko I was also not so close to the subject and it
> is
> > > > great
> > > > > > to
> > > > > > > > > > see the final selection.
> > > > > > > > > > It looks so great. Thanks for all the work Emma and
> > everyone!
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > Ismaël
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > On Mon, Oct 2, 2023 at 3:23 PM Fokko Driesprong <
> > > > > [email protected]>
> > > > > > > > > wrote:
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > Hey Oscar,
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > Thanks for raising this vote. I wasn't active in the
> > > > > conversation
> > > > > > > > > > > around the new logo, but I followed it from the
> sideline.
> > > The
> > > > > new
> > > > > > > > > logos are
> > > > > > > > > > > fantastic. Kudos to Emma.
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > I really like the pigeon, especially the one with the
> > > > envelope!
> > > > > > My
> > > > > > > > vote
> > > > > > > > > > > goes to V6.1 if I can't vote on the alternative version
> > :)
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > Cheers, Fokko
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > Op ma 2 okt 2023 om 14:14 schreef Oscar Westra van
> > Holthe -
> > > > > Kind
> > > > > > <
> > > > > > > > > > > [email protected]>:
> > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > Hello everyone,
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > The past month, there has been new progress on our
> > search
> > > > > for a
> > > > > > > new
> > > > > > > > > logo (
> > > > > > > > > > > > AVRO-3554 <
> > > https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AVRO-3554
> > > > > >).
> > > > > > > > > Thanks to
> > > > > > > > > > > > Emma Kellam and the feedback we've all given, we can
> > now
> > > > > > proceed
> > > > > > > to
> > > > > > > > > vote on
> > > > > > > > > > > > the matter.
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > These are the finalists to choose from (if the image
> is
> > > > > > > unreadable,
> > > > > > > > > it
> > > > > > > > > > > > links to the comment where the finalists are
> > announced):
> > > > > > > > > > > > <
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
> https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AVRO-3554?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels%3Acomment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=17770969#comment-17770969
> > > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > So now, we can vote. Because a logo lasts longer
> than a
> > > > > typical
> > > > > > > > > release,
> > > > > > > > > > > > the rules deviate from the usual rules
> > > > > > > > > > > > <https://www.apache.org/foundation/voting>:
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > >    - the vote lasts 2 weeks
> > > > > > > > > > > >    - to avoid confusion, please vote with the V...
> > > > > ifentifier:
> > > > > > > > V9.2,
> > > > > > > > > V10.2,
> > > > > > > > > > > >    V11.2, V3.1
> > > > > > > > > > > >    - the winner is the logo with at least two (2)
> votes
> > > > more
> > > > > > than
> > > > > > > > the
> > > > > > > > > > > >    runner-up
> > > > > > > > > > > >    - if there is no clear winner, we'll vote by
> simple
> > > > > majority
> > > > > > > > > between the
> > > > > > > > > > > >    top picks
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > Please vote for your preference!
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > Kind regards,
> > > > > > > > > > > > Oscar
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > > > > --
> > > > > > > > > > > > ✉️ Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <[email protected]
> >
> > > > > > > > > > > > 🌐 https://github.com/opwvhk/
> > > > > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > --
> > > > > > > Ryan Blue
> > > > > > > Tabular
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > --
> > > > >
> > > > > ✉️ Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <[email protected]>
> > > > >
> > > > > --
> > > > > Oscar Westra van Holthe - Kind <[email protected]>
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> >
>


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