> Scott, > It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows > expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers, > desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). " > I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create to > "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online applications...", > "...online and offline applications..." or remove the word "web" all > together.
I need help here. Is anyone else confused / concerned by the current phrase?
