On Wed, Jan 9, 2013 at 11:08 AM, Guthmann, Scott <sguthm...@on3solutions.com > wrote:
> > It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows > expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers, > desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). " > > I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create > to "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online > applications...", "...online and offline applications..." or remove the > word "web" all together. > Removing "web" altogether correction has been made. > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bThdnEJZ20y0eStK863kcLSw7joDqKhw6THVLe2dCVQ/editGood > catch! > A very similar line appears in paragraph 5 as well. Can you please update that one too? Thanks, Om
