On Wed, Jan 9, 2013 at 10:40 AM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com> wrote:
> > > > On 1/9/13 10:37 AM, "Guthmann, Scott" <sguthm...@on3solutions.com> wrote: > > >> Scott, > >> It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows > >> expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major > browsers, > >> desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). " > >> I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can > create to > >> "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online > applications...", > >> "...online and offline applications..." or remove the word "web" all > >> together. > > > > I need help here. Is anyone else confused / concerned by the current > phrase? > I think you can drop the word "web". > > To be fair, the first paragraph on our website: http://flex.apache.org/says exactly that. With the term "web" in it. Whatever we do, lets keep it consistent. Thanks, Om
