> It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows 
> expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers, 
> desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). "
> I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create to 
> "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online applications...", 
> "...online and offline applications..."  or remove the word "web" all 
> together.
Removing "web" altogether correction has been made. 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bThdnEJZ20y0eStK863kcLSw7joDqKhw6THVLe2dCVQ/edit
 Good catch!

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