> It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows > expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers, > desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). " > I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create to > "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online applications...", > "...online and offline applications..." or remove the word "web" all > together. Removing "web" altogether correction has been made. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bThdnEJZ20y0eStK863kcLSw7joDqKhw6THVLe2dCVQ/edit Good catch!
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- RE: [Marketing] - Telling the world that we are a TLP... Guthmann, Scott
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