Hi,
  Looks pretty good. Few comments before I vote :)

1. The release notes Overview section says

    * Passes the Sun JPA 2.0 TCK
    * Implements the final JSR-317 JPA 2.0 specification APIs
    * Supports the final JSR-303 Bean Validation 1.0 specification APIs
    * Extended lock scope support
    * Support for CacheRetrieve/StoreMode properties on find/refresh methods
    * Updated find/refresh methods to support entity manager level
properties
    * Reworked support for delimited identifiers

The wide variation in granularity/import of these bullet items reads
strange. As if passing JPA 2.0 TCK and "Updated find/refresh" are somewhat
at the sevel of import :)

This paragraph being the first section of the release notes should be
reworked to describe only the significant aspect of the release.

2. openjpa-osgi 
   A module has appeared which has not been mentioned either in the
documentation or in the release notes. The single Java source code for it
shows comments that should be removed. Actually, to include as openjpa-osgi
as module at all within the distribution will require at least some
documentation.

3. May be we should add few words in Overview section about the outcome of
the performance improvement activities.

4. http://people.apache.org/~dwoods/openjpa/2.0.0-beta/staging-site/
  The links from this page are 404












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