minor nit

I would add a serial comma before this:

"and advising communities"

i.e., this:

"strategic planning, providing a framework and tools to support diversity
and inclusion initiatives, and advising communities on matters related to
diversity and inclusion."

On Fri, 10 May 2019 at 12:07, Sam Ruby <[email protected]> wrote:

> On Fri, May 10, 2019 at 2:14 AM Myrle Krantz <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > To answer Justin, Whimsy's problem with the non-standard text is probably
> > because it's a president's committee.  There's no template for
> president's
> > committees in Whimsy (nor is one needed : o).  The problem with the
> emails
> > is because we have two non-committers on the proposed role: Austin and
> > Aizhamal.  If this were a graduation we'd have a project to request them
> to
> > be added to before it, but it's not, so we don't.  I'm a little uncertain
> > about adding non-committers to the PMC, but I reasoned it so:  The
> biggest
> > part of merit is the willingness to help and work with others.
>
> I updated the board agenda tool check for non-standard warning to
> allow the word committee.
>
> I will note that the resolution as posted states "to serve at the
> direction of the President", which differs from the wording used when
> a podling graduates.
>
> I have seen occasion where the board has removed people without an
> apache.org address from the resolution and passed the resulting
> resolution, leaving it to the new committee to vote these people in.
> Personally, given the controversy surrounding this resolution, I would
> recommend removing these names for now.
>
> > Best Regards,
> > Myrle
>
> - Sam Ruby
>
> > On Fri, May 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Gris Cuevas <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > > Thanks Myrle for re-organizing the proposal and for adding all the
> folks
> > > who expressed interest. As part of the discussion we had around this, I
> > > decided to also update the following paragraph:
> > >
> > > " WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best interests
> of
> > > the
> > > Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's purpose to appoint a
> > > Committee
> > > responsible for diversity and inclusion matters, including but not
> limited
> > > to
> > > strategic planning and management of risks related to matters of
> diversity
> > > and
> > > inclusion."
> > >
> > > to the following one:
> > >
> > > "WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best interests
> of
> > > the
> > > Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's purpose to appoint a
> > > Committee
> > > responsible for diversity and inclusion matters, including but not
> limited
> > > to
> > > strategic planning, providing a framework and tools to support
> diversity
> > > and inclusion initiatives and advising communities on matters related
> to
> > > diversity and inclusion."
> > >
> > > I updated the term "risk management" to be more specific.
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > <Updated Request>
> > >
> > > WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best interests
> of the
> > > Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's purpose to appoint a
> > > Committee
> > > responsible for diversity and inclusion matters, including but not
> limited
> > > to
> > > strategic planning, providing a framework and tools to support
> diversity
> > > and inclusion initiatives and advising communities on matters related
> to
> > > diversity and inclusion.
> > >
> > > NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT RESOLVED that the office of "Vice President,
> > > Diversity
> > > and Inclusion" be and hereby is created, the person holding such
> office to
> > > serve at the direction of the President, and to have primary
> > > responsibility of
> > > managing the ASF's diversity and inclusion strategy; and be it further
> > >
> > > RESOLVED, that the responsibilities of the Vice President of Diversity
> and
> > > Inclusion shall henceforth include management of the Diversity and
> > > Inclusion
> > > Committee as its chair; and be it further
> > >
> > > RESOLVED, that the persons listed immediately below be and hereby are
> > > appointed to serve as the initial members of the Apache Diversity and
> > > Inclusion Committee:
> > >
> > > * Rich Bowen <[email protected]>
> > > * Griselda Cuevas Zambrano <[email protected]>
> > > * Shane Curcuru <[email protected]>
> > > * Ross Gardler <[email protected]>
> > > * Daniel Gruno <[email protected]>
> > > * Dinesh Joshi <djoshi.apache.org>
> > > * Kenneth Knowles <[email protected]>
> > > * Myrle Krantz <[email protected]>
> > > * Justin Mclean <[email protected]>
> > > * Sam Ruby <[email protected]>
> > > * Craig L Russell <[email protected]>
> > > * Naomi Slater <[email protected]>
> > > * Joan Touzet <[email protected]>
> > >
> > > NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT FURTHER RESOLVED, that Griselda Cuevas Zambrano
> be
> > > appointed to the office of Vice President, Apache Diversity and
> Inclusion,
> > > to
> > > serve in accordance with and subject to the direction of the President
> and
> > > the
> > > Bylaws of the Foundation until death, resignation, retirement, removal
> or
> > > disqualification, or until a successor is appointed.
> > >
> > > </Updated Request>
> > >
>
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