Hi Lee

At 12:04 11.12.01 +0000, you wrote:

>I finally got my head around my new gear and this is the 1st thing which I
>think is Ok(ish)
>
>It's not finished by any means - in fact it just loops for a while after
>drop and ends abruptly.
>
>Just looking for a bit of feedback.

Some spontaneous ideas I had while listening to this:
Insert some pauses between your bass hits to increase the dynamics and add 
some funkyness. In it's current state it just goes round and round... which 
makes it sound very repetetive. The sound of the beats are nice, but they 
scream for ghost hits, funky fill-ins etc. I'd also try some more acoustic 
sounding hihhats, these are too high and fast IMHO. The electric piano 
sounds good, just try to vary the chord progression (with the help of the 
great music theory articles posted here some weeks ago ;), the same goes 
for the bassline. Put some work into this and this can be a nice liquid 
funk track.
I hope this helps, maybe it's totally rubbish, because I never tried to 
produce this kind of DnB ;P


peace
Felix

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