this is an excellent track... something to keep around for the playlist... 
snappy snare drum, at some points it sounds a little too mechanical (before 
the bell solo mostly).... perhaps throw some snare rushes in on the parts 
where the snare's got the focus, it's a good snare, try something creative 
with it.  The 2:00 mark is a neat bell and synth duet, but there's a point 
where it gets a little slow and could cause someone to drop their 
attention... this might be solved with some interesting samples, some 
bass/synth freak out stuff, or just changing the arrangement... or by doing 
something creative with the snare to make the meat of the track hook the 
listener's attention..

At 09:00 PM 12/31/01, you wrote:
>Hi all .. have been lurking on this list for a couple weeks now ...
>
>http://baal.moonsquid.net/rafar/music/zoink.mp3
>
>Disclaimer, I have only been doing this a very short while and am fully
>aware that I don't know shit :) So be gentle. Pointers etc would be cool. I
>am enjoying myself thus far though!
>
>Would anyone have any links to sites with information on what is involved in
>making a track from start to finish? Just good general information on the
>whole deal. Thanks!
>
>Richard
>
>P.S Hope everyone had an excellent new years
>
>
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