On 27.4.2017 02:43, Daniel Kahn Gillmor wrote: > Hi Jan-- > > On Wed 2017-04-26 11:05:33 +0200, Jan Včelák wrote: >> thank you for writing this down. The draft is great. And it's awesome >> that it's accompanied with an actual running code. > > thanks! and thanks for the quick review :) > >> A have just a few notes after reading the draft for the first time: >> - For the sake of simplicity, I would suggest dropping the part about >> HTTP/0.9. I don't think it's worth the effort keeping it supported. > > That would definitely make the document much simpler :) I suppose i > should float this by the HTTP community, to see whether they agree that > it's ok to drop HTTP/0.9. > >> - The Section 3 (Overview of initial octets) is a little bit chaotic >> and scattered. Maybe it would be more readable if you just provided >> pointers to specification of the protocols without providing much >> details, then shown the initial octets (or headers) side by side >> without analysing the content, and in the end walked by the bytes from >> the beginning while discussing the values. > > I understand what you're saying, i'm not sure how to do this exactly. > With DNS, the fields are fixed size and have fixed meaning, but with > HTTP, there's an abstract grammar. So they don't just "line up" side by > side, as it were. > > I can certainly remove the copied text and just leave pointers to other > documents, but that seems like it effectively asks the reader to do a > bunch of pointer chasing when i've already done the pointer-chasing for > them.
Let me state that I like current version with copied text. For me it is really easier to follow than jumping between documents. Petr Špaček @ CZ.NIC > > Any concrete suggestions for how to improve it? It's maintained in > markdown at https://gitlab.com/dkg/hddemux and i welcome merge requests > or patches! > >> - I love how simple the algorithm is in the end. And the proof is >> great. > > I'm glad you like it too -- i'm happy that it seems possible to be > strictly confident in the demuxing. > > --dkg _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
