Hi Alan I think it looks good, I'd just suggest adding some visual element to connect the two columns under Quick Start. It's a nit, but it takes a bit to notice that they are questions/answers.
2c Rafael On 10/16/08 12:54, alan mcclellan wrote: > Folks, I'm finally getting around to responding to some inputs I've > gotten about the OSOL docs community page. Since there are so many balls > in the air right now, I'm targeting a page update to support the 2008.11 > release and the docs/content available with that release. > > I'd like to take a cue here from Michelle and the website community and > float a sample page for review. Please let me know what you think. I'm > trying to factor in comments I've received and the audience analysis > I've done to match our information with our user community. Couple of > specific notes: > > * Don't worry about resolving links. Most don't. > * Haven't touched left nav, but if you have comments about it, let me know. > * Any other feedback appreciated. > > Here's the link: > > http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/HomeTest/ > > -alan >
