Greetings. Well, this is a day or two early for me, so it only makes it a week late. My apologies.
In keeping with the minimal changes made, I have minimal comments. :-) It's looking pretty darn good. I'm guessing the Tables page is a placeholder, for when the whole doc gets stitched back together. Why is Example 4.1 an example, but all the others aren't? (Does this comment make sense to you? If not, I can clarify.) page 9, first sentence has bolded words. Is this intentional, in the context of your comment around bold for key words and text? This is also in the first sentence of the About These Guidelines section. page 9, first sentence in About These Guidelines refers to a web browser. I assume this one was just missed? page 9, About... second paragraph. I'm assuming the intended underlining got hosed by the change management. pp 11 & 12 refer to items on other pages, without the page numbers. Link breakage? page 12, Man Pages refers to SunOS. Should this be changed to OpenSolaris? Or a more generic reference made? Good addition to the Index. Gee, that's really all I see. Like I say, it looks pretty good. Again, my apologies for the tardiness. I'll try to be on time for the next review. Rainer This message posted from opensolaris.org
