Hello,
I'd like to submit a little patch for a sentence in:
httpd-trunk/docs/manual/howto/http2.xml
The original sentence I'm changing is:
"There are still request and responses and headers and all that"
and the proposed change is:
"There are still request,responses, headers and all those typical elements
from HTTP"
The reasoning behind this starts while trying to translate the sentence to
Spanish, where it becomes too aparent as chatty, or tasteless, and from my
standpoint it may also sound too coloquial in english too (although I'm no
native speaker so that's up to you guys to judge).
I'm attaching the diff file which includes the whole paragrah because it
has also been adapted for word wrapping.
If I'm being too picky or proposing this incorrectly, please do not
hesitate to let me know.
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*Daniel Ferradal*
IT Specialist
email daniel at ezra-s.net
linkedin es.linkedin.com/in/danielferradal
Index: manual/howto/http2.xml
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--- manual/howto/http2.xml (revision 1771918)
+++ manual/howto/http2.xml (working copy)
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
<title>The HTTP/2 protocol</title>
<p>HTTP/2 is the evolution of the world's most successful application
layer protocol, HTTP.
It focuses on making more efficient use of network resources. It does not
change the fundamentals
- of HTTP, the semantics. There are still request and responses and headers
and all that. So, if
- you already know HTTP/1, you know 95% about HTTP/2 as well.</p>
+ of HTTP, the semantics. There are still request,responses, headers and all
those typical elements
+ from HTTP. So, if you already know HTTP/1, you know 95% about HTTP/2 as
well.</p>
<p>There has been a lot written about HTTP/2 and how it works. The most
normative is, of course,
its <a href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7540";>RFC 7540</a>
(<a href="http://httpwg.org/specs/rfc7540.html";>also available in more
readable formatting, YMMV</a>).
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