Thanks, Karen! I'll see if I can work in some of your suggestions and send a 2nd attempt once complete. We have a Board meeting tomorrow, so I'll aim to get a quote from Shaun then :)
In the meantime, @everyone else - more edits / suggestions are welcome, so please keep them coming! On Mon, Jul 11, 2016 at 2:06 PM, Karen Sandler <[email protected]> wrote: > On 2016-07-11 16:58, Nuritzi Sanchez wrote: > > It'd be great to post this on Wednesday, so please add your thoughts >> and edits before then. Thanks! >> > > This looks good to me! A few suggestions: > > * maybe mention that the board are volunteers? > * specifically name the outgoing members and thank them for their time on > the board > * include a quote, perhaps from last year's president? > * perhaps mention the breadth of experience that the board has? Like: the > new board has experience that spans the GNOME project, from development to > design to usability... etc. > > karen > -- ............................................................ ................. *Nuritzi Sanchez* | +1.650.218.7388 | Endless <http://endlessm.com/>
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