I agree with Karen's edits. Also, we should make sure to update the GNOME Foundation page at the same time: https://www.gnome.org/Foundation/
I opened a bug with the webmasters on this a few weeks ago: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=768197 Jim On Mon, Jul 11, 2016 at 4:15 PM, Nuritzi Sanchez <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks, Karen! I'll see if I can work in some of your suggestions and send a > 2nd attempt once complete. We have a Board meeting tomorrow, so I'll aim to > get a quote from Shaun then :) > > In the meantime, @everyone else - more edits / suggestions are welcome, so > please keep them coming! > > > On Mon, Jul 11, 2016 at 2:06 PM, Karen Sandler <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> On 2016-07-11 16:58, Nuritzi Sanchez wrote: >> >>> It'd be great to post this on Wednesday, so please add your thoughts >>> and edits before then. Thanks! >> >> >> This looks good to me! A few suggestions: >> >> * maybe mention that the board are volunteers? >> * specifically name the outgoing members and thank them for their time on >> the board >> * include a quote, perhaps from last year's president? >> * perhaps mention the breadth of experience that the board has? Like: the >> new board has experience that spans the GNOME project, from development to >> design to usability... etc. >> >> karen > _______________________________________________ engagement-list mailing list [email protected] https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
