I would change the intro a bit: Thank you TO all (of you) for giving me such a wonderful support.
A comment: It's not correct to use "I'm writing". The paragraph: > " It is very common that we always get some gap between the projects. > After we accomplished the project, the same way we get some free days. It is very common we always have some days off between projects. After finishing a project, we use to have some free days. > Our team decide to learn some technology which speed up our next > development process. I choose PHP and I suggested it to other members. My workmates and I are software developers (?) and we work as a team. During the last free days we decided to learn something new, in orden to speed up our next development process. I though PHP would be interesting and suggested (to use) it to the others / other members. > I knew that it is very easy to learn and the interesting thing is, > this power language is free to use and distribute. It is a open source > technology. I know it's very easy to learn and the interesting thing is that this language is powerful and free to use and distribute. It's open source software / technology. > So we download it and begin to study. After few days we felt that it > is so simple and most of the syntax like the C language. " Then (thus/therefore, if formal), we downloaded it and began to study it. After few day we felt it was really simple, and realized that most of its syntax was like the C language one. Thanks, Pablo On Mar 16, 10:56 pm, Mathew <[email protected]> wrote: > Thank you all for giving me such a wonderful support. > > I am writing my next paragraph > > " It is very common that we always get some gap between the projects. > After we accomplished the project, the same way we get some free days. > Our team decide to learn some technology which speed up our next > development process. I choose PHP and I suggested it to other members. > I knew that it is very easy to learn and the interesting thing is, > this power language is free to use and distribute. It is a open source > technology. > > So we download it and begin to study. After few days we felt that it > is so simple and most of the syntax like the C language. " --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "English Learner's Cafe" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/english_learners?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
