Hi Mathew,

(...) my speech was totally confusing. At the meeting (...)
(...)I read many articles regarding the crisis and created. Based on
them I spoke confidently at that(...)
(...) the uncomfortable English words I made (...) Here you could also
say: Feeling confident about the issue, but not so confident about the
English words to use, I made...
(...)Mr. Dani was not present at the meeting. If he were there, he
would have shouted at me. I noticed the laziness of the people sat at
the hall. I could see the disturbance on their faces and I was
surprised when they clapped their hands, when I finished my speech.

Regards

Lil

On Mar 11, 2:18 am, [email protected] wrote:
> Thank you Anu.
>
> May write my second Paragragh
>
> " After the weekly start up meeting ended, my colleague said that my speech  
> was totally confusing one. In the meeting I spoke about the current  
> economic crisis. I read many article regarding the crisis and create some  
> points and on the basis of that I spoke confidently on that particular  
> meeting. With the confident level in the issue and the uncomfortable  
> English words I make a ten minute speech there. Luckily Mr. Dani was not  
> present on the meeting, if he is there, he may shouted on me. The things I  
> noticed there are the laziness of the persons sitting on the hall. I can  
> see the disturbance on their faces and I surprised the clasps they gave me  
> after I windup my talk."
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