On Jul 14, 2009, at 10:09 PM, Eric Wasylishen wrote: > Hi, > I put a new "introductory paragraph" on http://etoileos.com/. I think > it will be more effective at getting visitors > interested..comments/feedback?
I think it's pretty good. However, depending on the target audience (average Joe, geeks?) I'm not so sure about the revision history part. The average Joe probably wouldn't really know what it was or why it's useful. Maybe "version tracking" (or whatever MS Word uses) would be a more self-explanatory term. > Does anyone object to using the phrase "Making computers suck less?" It's not very professional, but I would say it appeals to geeks. It reminds me a lot of http://www.suckless.org/ I think the "read more" site needs some expansion on the various concepts. At the moment it has a very brief overview of the goals, and mostly technical stuff (frameworks). _______________________________________________ Etoile-discuss mailing list [email protected] https://mail.gna.org/listinfo/etoile-discuss
