Ignorant thing to say ... Troops came home under his watch ... Nick Andrews <[email protected]> wrote:
>Wow Barack, I didn't know you were literate or could write anything, >much less that you were on this list! > >On Fri, Jan 27, 2012 at 3:52 AM, <[email protected]> wrote: >> How do I submit to your forum please, as I have questions? >> >> I cannot agree with someone's comments on the Magician, as an author - >> presently because of the inconsistencies, I am not even sure it is worth >> with the effort in finishing it. I said this to a friend just now: >> >> I know writing a book is the hardest thing I have ever done in many >> respects, but I did not expect... well I was thinking on it just now - I >> expected to be enthused by other authors, perhaps sometimes not find what >> they are writing about to be particularly of my genre, but I did not expect >> to be left feeling disappointed because they make silly spelling mistakes, >> place things in the wrong terms - so what they are saying conveys completely >> the opposite to what they intend, to be so predictable at times - that I >> know what is going to happen several chapters down the line or in the next >> book. Not to mention inconsistencies - where I feel the effort I putting >> into the book in reading it, is just not worth the effort. >> >> These all appear, as much as I can gather in the book I am reading at the >> moment, and people say Raymond E Feist's work actually becomes less >> consistent later, and less well written. >> >> I was up until 1.30 am the other morning in desperation about the book, >> trying to find reasons as to myself not being right, and if there was >> alternative books to read. So started looking at the Top 100 Recommended >> Fantasy books on the net, and every one of these list consisted of books, >> which I had either read or attempted to read and thought was either poor or >> was at best overrated... >> >> Let me put it this way please, I find my own work takes me more by surprise >> its twist and turn on the whole and is less predictable - and I wrote it, >> than much or most of the work out there, and I have to say I found that with >> Magician. Take for instance the King, who is troubled with some malady, well >> I have not even read this yet, but I know that it will by his cousin Guy is >> it, who will have some hold over him, which is not revealed until later >> books. I suspect knowing the 2/3rds of the book of Feist's I have read, it >> will be some magical crystal or something. It is pretty much the same >> affliction, which troubles the King of Rowan in Lord of the Rings... Come up >> with something original writers. It is ironic, that "all" of my work shows >> more originality than just about any best selling author out there, and I >> believe is also better written, yet it fails to be given a chance >> to be recognised!!! >> >> Here is my work, but it does strike myself that readers are taken for >> granted, and both are readers and authors are mired in complacent apathy - >> when far, far, far more can and should be done with the realm of writing. >> >> The synopsis for the book I am currently working on is below: >> >> The Tallest Dwarf >> >> >> >> Yours Sean Sebastian White >> >> In a message dated 27/01/2012 10:36:35 GMT Standard Time, >> [email protected] writes: >> >> Elizabeth, well said! I agree with you. >> >> 2011/12/21 Elizabeth <[email protected]>: >>> Magician is like a degustation , challenging, a blend of subtle flavours >>> and >>> nuances of texture and smell. Memorable and full of oft relived moments. >>> Harry is McDonalds, fast, predictable and filling, but ultimately >>> forgettable. We eat at Maccas for a quick feed. Magician is a feast for >>> all >>> the senses. ( poor pun intended). >>> >>> Merry everything, Happy always >>> >>> Elizabeth >>> >> > > > >-- >Nick A > >"You know what I wish? I wish that all the scum of the world had but >a single throat, and I had my hands about it..." Rorschach, 1975 > >"They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary >safety deserve neither liberty nor safety."- Benjamin Franklin, >Historical Review of Pennsylvania, 1759 > >"Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names >the streets after them." Bill Vaughan > >"The price of apathy towards public affairs is to be ruled by evil men." Plato > >
