I'm usually not a stickler for little things, and overall I really enjoyed
Magician's End....BUT..

Am I the only one who noticed that Jorna was actually killed by Nakor in
Shards of a Broken Crown (she transferred to Kahil's body) after he killed
Fadawah, and not the demon?  Normally, it would be a small point, but since
the incorrect reference to being killed by Jarkan the Demon is found on at
least a half dozen pages, it irks me a fair bit.

Kind of changes the story a fair bit:

"What's the last thing you remember, Jorna?"
"Being killed by you, Nakor, being bathed in white light from your staff"

Best,

Phil

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