Please see attached review.
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-herzog-static-ecdh-04.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2011-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2011-03-02
IESG Telechat date:
Summary: Almost ready
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Comment:
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The General Area AD is much better placed to review this document than I am, as
far as the cryptographic and security aspects go. The document appears to be
clear and complete with just minor fixes needed.
Minor issues
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[SEC1] Brown, D., "Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1 (SEC
1)", Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1, May 2009.
This may be a well known reference for practitioners, but it doesn't seem
to be a sufficient citation for a normative reference. Google can't even find
it. If it is meant to be the same thing as reference [SEC1] in RFC 5480,
please cite it in the same way; Google can find that one and the IESG has
already accepted it as a normative reference.
Nit
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