Thanks Jonathan, so it is back in the hands of the document shepherd and AD.
Regards Brian On 2011-02-24 08:16, Herzog, Jonathan - 0668 - MITLL wrote: > Okay, I have submitted an updated (corrected) version: > draft-herzog-static-ecdh-05.txt > > It requires manual posting, and so will appear on the IETF site in a day or > two. In the meantime, I attach it to this email. > > Yours are the only Last-Call comments I received on this draft (I think), and > so I now believe all comments have been addressed. > > Thanks. > > On Feb 17, 2011, at 2:41 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > >> Jonathan, >> >> That looks fine. The boilerplate will certainly be updated during editing; >> those of us who use the xml2rfc tool to generate drafts are accustomed >> to the tool producing correct boilerplate automatically. >> >> Regards >> Brian Carpenter >> >> >> On 2011-02-18 07:29, Herzog, Jonathan - 0668 - MITLL wrote: >>> On Feb 6, 2011, at 7:35 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: >>> >>>> Please see attached review. >>> >>> Before I incorporate these comments into the document, I thought I'd >>> describe our proposed changes: >>> >>>> Minor issues >>>> ------------ >>>> >>>> [SEC1] Brown, D., "Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1 (SEC >>>> 1)", Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1, May 2009. >>>> >>>> This may be a well known reference for practitioners, but it doesn't seem >>>> to be a sufficient citation for a normative reference. Google can't even >>>> find >>>> it. If it is meant to be the same thing as reference [SEC1] in RFC 5480, >>>> please cite it in the same way; Google can find that one and the IESG has >>>> already accepted it as a normative reference. >>> >>> Good call. I will change the reference to match that in RFC 5480: >>> >>> [SEC1] Standards for Efficient Cryptography Group (SECG), "SEC >>> 1: Elliptic Curve Cryptography", Version 2.0, May 2009. >>> >>> >>> >>>> Nit >>>> --- >>>> >>>> == You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice from >>>> 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009. (See >>>> http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/) >>>> >>> I was advised to leave this alone, as the RFC editor would update the >>> notice when it gets published. >>> >>> >>> >>> Would these edits address your concerns? >>> >>> Thanks. >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Jonathan Herzog voice: >>> (781) 981-2356 >>> Technical Staff fax: >>> (781) 981-7687 >>> Cyber Systems and Technology Group email: [email protected] >>> MIT Lincoln Laboratory www: >>> http://www.ll.mit.edu/CST/ >>> 244 Wood Street >>> Lexington, MA 02420-9185 >>> > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
