On Feb 6, 2011, at 7:35 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > Please see attached review.
Before I incorporate these comments into the document, I thought I'd describe
our proposed changes:
> Minor issues
> ------------
>
> [SEC1] Brown, D., "Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1 (SEC
> 1)", Standards for Efficient Cryptography 1, May 2009.
>
> This may be a well known reference for practitioners, but it doesn't seem
> to be a sufficient citation for a normative reference. Google can't even find
> it. If it is meant to be the same thing as reference [SEC1] in RFC 5480,
> please cite it in the same way; Google can find that one and the IESG has
> already accepted it as a normative reference.
Good call. I will change the reference to match that in RFC 5480:
[SEC1] Standards for Efficient Cryptography Group (SECG), "SEC
1: Elliptic Curve Cryptography", Version 2.0, May 2009.
> Nit
> ---
>
> == You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice from
> 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009. (See
> http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)
>
I was advised to leave this alone, as the RFC editor would update the notice
when it gets published.
Would these edits address your concerns?
Thanks.
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