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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-03-23 IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-11 IESG Telechat date: 2013-03-28 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard, but I have a comment. Editorial comment: Section 11, the following sentence can be written : "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and which deployments can use to meet these needs. " Suggestion: "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet these needs." Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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