Seems like an improvement to me.
Yours,
Joel
On 3/27/2013 2:56 AM, Jari Arkko wrote:
Thanks for the review, Meral! Authors, can you consider the suggested edit?
Jari
On Mar 23, 2013, at 8:21 PM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]>
wrote:
Section 11, the following sentence can be written :
"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security
mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and which deployments can
use to meet these needs."
Suggestion:
"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security
mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet these needs."
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