Thanks for the review, Meral! Authors, can you consider the suggested edit?
Jari On Mar 23, 2013, at 8:21 PM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > Section 11, the following sentence can be written : > "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of > security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and > which deployments can use to meet these needs. " > Suggestion: > "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of > security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet > these needs." > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
