Incorparated the change into the document. Thanks to Jari. Weiming ----- Original Message ----- From: "Joel M. Halpern" <[email protected]>
> Seems like an improvement to me. > Yours, > Joel > > On 3/27/2013 2:56 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: >> Thanks for the review, Meral! Authors, can you consider the suggested edit? >> >> Jari >> >> On Mar 23, 2013, at 8:21 PM, Meral Shirazipour >> <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Section 11, the following sentence can be written : >>> "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of >>> security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and >>> which deployments can use to meet these needs." >>> Suggestion: >>> "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of >>> security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet >>> these needs." >>> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
