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Regards Brian Carpenter http://orcid.org/0000-0001-7924-6182 On 18/09/2013 00:07, Eric Burger wrote: > I've copied the RFC Editor to let her weigh in. My assumption is that sort of > stuff is what the RFC Editor does -- edit. Let them have at it. It will delay > publication a little, but not as much as asking you to reformat everything. > > On Sep 17, 2013, at 6:34 AM, Lorenzo Miniero <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Sorry for this delay, I've been a bit busy. >> >> I have made those changes Brian and others suggested (Mealy, AS as >> Application Server), but apparently the xml.resource.org got a bit >> stricter in a few parts: the resulting draft now has a lot of lines >> that go beyond the 72 characters limit for lines, apparently because the >> default left margin has been moved. >> >> Fixing this would require quite a lot of changes in formatting: is there >> some way the RFC editor can take care of those small changes without >> requiring this, or should we adapt the draft before submitting the new >> version? >> >> Thanks, >> Lorenzo >> >> >> Il giorno Fri, 13 Sep 2013 07:56:58 +1200 >> Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> ha scritto: >> >>>>> Would it >>>>> be ok to add the "finite state automaton" in brackets after the >>>>> text where "Mealy automaton" is first introduced? >>> That would be fine for me. >>> >>> Regards >>> Brian >>> >>> On 12/09/2013 21:41, Jari Arkko wrote: >>>> Brian: Thank you for your review, and thank you Lorenzo for taking >>>> these comments into account. I have balloted No-Objection for this >>>> document. >>>> >>>> jari >>>> >>>> On Sep 9, 2013, at 6:08 PM, Lorenzo Miniero <[email protected]> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Brian, >>>>> >>>>> thanks for the review! We'll add those elements to the terminology >>>>> section. >>>>> >>>>> About the "Mealy automaton", rather than adding a reference to >>>>> pages like Wikipedia, I'd go for an inline indication to the >>>>> reader. Would it be ok to add the "finite state automaton" in >>>>> brackets after the text where "Mealy automaton" is first >>>>> introduced? >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Lorenzo >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Il giorno Sun, 08 Sep 2013 13:05:55 +1200 >>>>> Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> ha scritto: >>>>> >>>>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background >>>>>> on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>>>>> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. >>>>>> >>>>>> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before >>>>>> posting a new version of the draft. >>>>>> >>>>>> Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-call-flows-13.txt (Informational) >>>>>> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter >>>>>> Review Date: 2013-09-08 >>>>>> IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-03 >>>>>> IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-12 >>>>>> >>>>>> Summary: Ready >>>>>> -------- >>>>>> >>>>>> Comment: >>>>>> -------- >>>>>> >>>>>> This is a massive (175pp) and highly specialised document, for >>>>>> which a generalist review is pretty much useless. I have not >>>>>> checked the example flows, XML extracts, etc. IMHO, we have to >>>>>> trust the authors and the WG in a case like this. >>>>>> >>>>>> The document is clear and where I have sampled the text in the >>>>>> examples it is up to standard. >>>>>> >>>>>> This review is the same as for Last Call; my comments are just >>>>>> editorial suggestions. >>>>>> >>>>>> Editorial: >>>>>> ---------- >>>>>> >>>>>> There are a few abbreviations (AS, MS, CFW) that could usefully be >>>>>> included in the Terminology section. >>>>>> >>>>>> Also, AS is widely used in the IETF to mean Autonomous System. >>>>>> Some readers might be confused at first, so this should be stated >>>>>> very clearly. >>>>>> >>>>>> "Mealy automaton" (section 4.1) needs a reference. Or it might be >>>>>> sufficient just to say "finite state automaton." >>>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> Gen-art mailing list >>>>> [email protected] >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >>>> > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
