I'm not an author, but I am closely involved with the document and the
base spec so will jump in here anyhow in interest of timing.
On 6/24/15 4:13 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
Thanks for your review, Tom. Authors, is there an answer to Tom’s question?
jari
On 17 Jun 2015, at 22:15, Tom Taylor <[email protected]> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 17 June 2015
IETF LC End Date: 17 June 2015
IESG Telechat date: 25 June 2015
Summary: This is a very short document expanding on a sentence in RFC 6665 to
make clear the requirements surrounding use of GRUUs in the SIP event
framework. It is probably good to go except for a minor issue of terminology
that needs clarification. The reviewer apologizes for not being current on that
terminology if it is a matter of common usage.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: The term "local target" is used in the text (and in RFC 6665. RFC 3261
speaks of a remote target, but not a local one. In which document is "local target"
defined?
It's a well-known slight-typo that appears in several SIP documents at
this point.
It should say "local contact" to reuse the terms from 3261 (and 5057),
but it follows easily from context that "local target" is the dual of
"remote target" (When A is in a dialog with B, A's remote target is B's
local contact/local target, and vice-versa).
IMHO in this case, keeping with the words used in 6665 (local target) is
the better thing to do.
RjS
Nits/editorial comments: None.
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