Thanks for the explanation, Robert! On 24 Jun 2015, at 18:47, Robert Sparks <[email protected]> wrote:
> I'm not an author, but I am closely involved with the document and the base > spec so will jump in here anyhow in interest of timing. > > On 6/24/15 4:13 PM, Jari Arkko wrote: >> Thanks for your review, Tom. Authors, is there an answer to Tom’s question? >> >> jari >> >> On 17 Jun 2015, at 22:15, Tom Taylor >> <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>> >>> >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >>> . >>> >>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >>> you may receive. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00 >>> Reviewer: Tom Taylor >>> Review Date: 17 June 2015 >>> IETF LC End Date: 17 June 2015 >>> IESG Telechat date: 25 June 2015 >>> >>> Summary: This is a very short document expanding on a sentence in RFC 6665 >>> to make clear the requirements surrounding use of GRUUs in the SIP event >>> framework. It is probably good to go except for a minor issue of >>> terminology that needs clarification. The reviewer apologizes for not being >>> current on that terminology if it is a matter of common usage. >>> >>> Major issues: None. >>> >>> Minor issues: The term "local target" is used in the text (and in RFC 6665. >>> RFC 3261 speaks of a remote target, but not a local one. In which document >>> is "local target" defined? >>> > It's a well-known slight-typo that appears in several SIP documents at this > point. > It should say "local contact" to reuse the terms from 3261 (and 5057), but it > follows easily from context that "local target" is the dual of "remote > target" (When A is in a dialog with B, A's remote target is B's local > contact/local target, and vice-versa). > > IMHO in this case, keeping with the words used in 6665 (local target) is the > better thing to do. > > RjS >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: None. >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >
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