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Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-6665-clarification-00
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 17 June 2015
IETF LC End Date: 17 June 2015
IESG Telechat date: 25 June 2015
Summary: This is a very short document expanding on a sentence in RFC
6665 to make clear the requirements surrounding use of GRUUs in the SIP
event framework. It is probably good to go except for a minor issue of
terminology that needs clarification. The reviewer apologizes for not
being current on that terminology if it is a matter of common usage.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: The term "local target" is used in the text (and in RFC
6665. RFC 3261 speaks of a remote target, but not a local one. In which
document is "local target" defined?
Nits/editorial comments: None.
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