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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-siprec-callflows-07 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 11/25/16 IETF LC End Date: 11/27/16 IESG Telechat date: (if known) 12/2/16 Summary: Ready. This is a very useful supporting document in the SIPREC cluster. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1. The title is slightly misleading, as the document does not have as goal to document all or the most important call flows, but rather to provide a grouping of significant examples. 'Examples of SUP Recording Call Flows' may have been a better title. 2. As the document uses terminology defined in [RFC7865] and [RFC6341], listing these two RFCs as Normative References seems necessary (can't understand the terms without reading the two RFCs) 3. typo in the Securoty Considerations section: ' Security considerations mentioned in [RFC7865] and [RFC7866] has to be followed ... s/has to/have to/
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