Thank you very much for your review, Dan. Authors, have you taken a look at 
Dan’s comments?

Jari

On 25 Nov 2016, at 14:16, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> wrote:

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> Document:
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> draft-ietf-siprec-callflows-07
> 
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 11/25/16
> IETF LC End Date: 11/27/16
> IESG Telechat date: (if known) 12/2/16
> 
> Summary: Ready.
> 
> This is a very useful supporting document in the SIPREC cluster.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> None
> 
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1. The title is slightly misleading, as the document does not have as goal to 
> document all or the most important call flows, but rather to provide a 
> grouping of significant examples. 'Examples of SUP Recording Call Flows' may 
> have been a better title.
> 
> 2. As the document uses terminology defined in [RFC7865] and [RFC6341], 
> listing these two RFCs as Normative References seems necessary (can't 
> understand the terms without reading the two RFCs)
> 
> 3. typo in the Securoty Considerations section: '
> 
> Security considerations mentioned in [RFC7865] and [RFC7866] has to be 
> followed ...
> 
> s/has to/have to/
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