On 01/23/2018 06:43 PM, Weijun Wang wrote: > I've uploaded an updated version at > > > http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~weijun/rfc5653bis/draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-07.html
This is a great format for reviewing these changes; thanks for generating it. Line 416 does not capitalize "optional" in "optional services", but lines 385 and 391 do. Lines 422 and 424 should probably capitalize "should". Line 429 should probably capitalize "may". At line 598, I would lean towards leaving "MUST" in lowercase as we are describing an application requirement, not prescribing one. Line 1174, I would leave "MAY" in lowercase. Line 1129, "may" should probably be capitalized. Line 1369, I would leave "MAY" alone as this seems more descriptive than prescriptive. Line 3221's use of "SHOULD" is prescriptive, but there's no other way to request the default QOP. So I would leave it lowercase (or change the wording, but I'm not trying to open any more cans of worms). _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
